Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Jeremoch Colton

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Jeremoch Colton

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:58, 21 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: In memory of the man who gave us Boba

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. Very nice! DwartiiDelver (talk) 23:41, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
  2. Objection handled via Discord. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH(Conversation) 02:09, 27 December 2020 (UTC)
  3. ACvote I still love all these minor film character nominations. MasterFredCommerce Guild(talk) 06:01, 24 January 2021 (UTC)
  4. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 17:41, 7 February 2021 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Tommy-Macaroni 22:03, 11 February 2021 (UTC)

Object

UberSoldat
  • Article title should be at "Colton," per naming policy. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 10:01, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
    • Ah, nice catch. All relevant pages should now be moved and redirects fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:36, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
Zed
  • Skin color is infobox-exclusive. Zed42 (talk) 11:09, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
DwartiiDelver
  • This is fairly minor, but should the House of Organa be listed before the Galactic Republic in the affiliations section of Colton's infobox? While not status articles, others such as Raymus Antilles and Evaan Verlaine list the House first under affiliations, although I suppose it's worth noting we don't yet know canonically if Colton is actually Alderaanian. DwartiiDelver (talk) 20:45, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
    • General precedent is to order affiliations chronologically and then alphabetically. Given that we don't know the timeframe for either of his affiliations I've gone with alphabetical. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:32, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
Fred strikes back
  • "Once the message ended, Organa and the Jedi discussed the possibility of the session being a trap but decided that it was likely authentic and presented a good opportunity for the Jedi to infiltrate the fallen Jedi Temple and alter a beacon being used to lure Jedi to their deaths." This sentence is quite long, especially with no commas. It would be beneficial to break it up into two sentences. MasterFredCommerce Guild(talk) 01:28, 23 January 2021 (UTC)
Ecks
  • I don't think it's necessary to include that he isn't Force-sensitive. It's by no means an exceptional trait (or lack thereof) for a human male. 1358 (Talk) 18:48, 26 January 2021 (UTC)
    • While it's safe to assume most non-Jedi characters aren't Force-sensitive I think it's definitely worth including when a source actually states it, especially given characters like Atton Rand, who turn out unexpectedly have the Force with out knowing. There's also precedent for this in Pharl_McQuarrie/Legends and Elis Helrot. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:47, 31 January 2021 (UTC)
      • I don't necessarily agree with this practice, but I'll defer to precedent, then. 1358 (Talk) 17:41, 7 February 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:03, 11 February 2021 (UTC)