Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Jedi mural

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Jedi mural

Nominated by: DarthSkyll (talk) 22:26, 2 February 2024 (UTC)
Nomination comments:
Date Archived: 17:59, 23 March 2024 (UTC)
Final word count: 386 words (65 introduction, 285 body, 36 behind the scenes)
Word count at nomination time: 396 words (68 introduction, 292 body, 36 behind the scenes)
WookieeProject (optional): WP:THR

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~~Could you please provide some context for the Nihil and the Occlusion Zone?~~ Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 04:08, 11 February 2024 (UTC)
- Done DarthSkyll (talk) 17:53, 20 February 2024 (UTC)

~~The intro could be expanded to at least include Ram's looking at it during the book~~ Lewisr (talk) 05:46, 17 February 2024 (UTC)
~~I think the info about the temple's construction would be better placed in the history section~~ Lewisr (talk) 05:46, 17 February 2024 (UTC)
~~Context for the Stormwall needed~~ Lewisr (talk) 05:46, 17 February 2024 (UTC)
- I expanded the intro, placed the construction info in the history section and I reworded the Nihil part to match the Alcedian Jedi page, which eliminated the Stormwall mention. DarthSkyll (talk) 17:53, 20 February 2024 (UTC)
  - I think including the year in the intro would be worthwhile Lewisr (talk) 02:37, 27 February 2024 (UTC)
    - Done DarthSkyll (talk) 13:32, 1 March 2024 (UTC)
~~That the mural was located in the attic should be mentioned sooner, probably even in the description section~~ Lewisr (talk) 00:00, 12 March 2024 (UTC)
- Done DarthSkyll (talk) 18:27, 18 March 2024 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 17:59, 23 March 2024 (UTC)