- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Jedi holocron (Alaris Prime)
- Nominated by: Commander Code-8 Hello There! 15:24, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Really thought this would have been a CAN, without the intro and Bts the body is only 256 words
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Support
- Despite still not having played the game myself, I always love these Galactic Battlegrounds articles DwartiiDelver (talk) 02:23, 10 May 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat93 
(talk) 06:31, 17 May 2021 (UTC)- JediMasterMacaroni
(Talk) 05:18, 30 May 2021 (UTC) 
1358 (Talk) 10:23, 28 June 2021 (UTC)- Tommy-Macaroni 11:56, 28 June 2021 (UTC)
Object
Dwartii
I assume "It had a circular gray" in the description is meant to say it had a circular gray base or something? Not entirely sure at the moment.DwartiiDelver (talk) 01:45, 10 May 2021 (UTC)- Yes, I was sure I wrote that earlier. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 01:47, 10 May 2021 (UTC)
Macaroni
It's not entirely clear if "an additional inaccessible holocron" is referring to the article's subject.JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 20:22, 23 May 2021 (UTC)
- Reworded. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 06:31, 25 May 2021 (UTC)
Ecks Dee
"Jinn and the Wookiees broke through a line of trees to find the path to the grove, from which he learned the ability of Jedi concentration, with which he could convert hostile buildings to the Wookiee side." Who is "he" referring to? I presume it's Jinn, but the previous clause has "Jinn and the Wookiees" as its subject. Furthermore, this sentence reads a bit weird due to the two consecutive "which he" clauses. See if you can reword for clarity and better flow.1358 (Talk) 12:43, 27 June 2021 (UTC)- Reworded. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 02:11, 28 June 2021 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 11:56, 28 June 2021 (UTC)