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Jedi Mind Trick (beverage)

  • Nominated by: —spookywillowwtalk 15:42, 30 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 19:17, 7 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 353 words (70 introduction, 195 body, 88 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELSWP:GEWP:ENT

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 11:35, 3 January 2024 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 01:54, 4 January 2024 (UTC)
  3. ACvote BLUE DRINK Fan26 (Talk) 13:34, 4 January 2024 (UTC)
  4. I've actually had this one. Weird, but pretty good if you're a grapefruit fan. Panther436 (talk) 00:00, 5 January 2024 (UTC)
  5. ACvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 19:16, 7 January 2024 (UTC)

Object

Uber
  • Eloc's description from the lead quote should be documented some more in the prose. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 16:30, 30 December 2023 (UTC)
    • Stuck flavor-changing into the sentence, but precedent for the Traveler's Guide noms is to not duplicate the info if its already present in Description.—spookywillowwtalk 17:19, 2 January 2024 (UTC)
      • More so his opinion on the drink isn't mentioned. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 18:52, 2 January 2024 (UTC)
        • Added that it didn't have a requirement to drink in Description above, and bewilderment below. However, the rest of the Traveler's Guide drinks/food status articles done really don't prosify his full opinion. I'd heavily prefer to keep the same precedent going among them all.—spookywillowwtalk 02:58, 3 January 2024 (UTC)
Anil
  • A full date for the parks (or just for the one that opened first) would be nice since two 2019 sources are being discussed in tandem.
  • I think the current use of quotation marks in BTS is a little misleading as it's not an exact quotation of the description in the menu. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 00:15, 6 January 2024 (UTC)
    • Should both be sorted; went with just the initial opening, as most GE noms seem to do.—spookywillowwtalk 03:37, 7 January 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:16, 7 January 2024 (UTC)