Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Jaynes

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Jaynes

• Nominated by: Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 17:24, July 27, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: WP:TOR!

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Assumming that Floyd will be satisfied. Cade Calrayn 01:27, August 18, 2012 (UTC)
2. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 22:45, August 18, 2012 (UTC)
3. CC7567 ^(talk) 06:09, August 22, 2012 (UTC)
4. —Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 17:48, August 31, 2012 (UTC)
5. 1358 ^(Talk) 22:20, August 31, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Cade

• The bio doesn't seem to be sourced other than the date. Shouldn't the rest of it be sourced to the mission? Cade Calrayn 17:33, July 27, 2012 (UTC)
  • Oops, fixed.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 19:09, July 27, 2012 (UTC)

Floyd

• Intro: You say that Jaynes was sent to Ord Mantell "at some point in the war", but later you write "Around the year 3,643 BBY, Jaynes had been stationed on Ord Mantell for nearly three years". So it seems safe to say that he was sent to Ord Mantell in 3,646 BBY, so express that in the article.
  • Fixed.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 22:30, August 17, 2012 (UTC)
• Same thing in the body, you don't give that timeframe.
  • Fixed.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 22:30, August 17, 2012 (UTC)
• You alternated between capitalizing and decapitalizing "separatists" in the Bio section. Pick one and make it consistent.
  • Fixed.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 22:30, August 17, 2012 (UTC)
• Nice work. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 00:51, August 16, 2012 (UTC)
  • Thanks.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 22:30, August 17, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:20, August 31, 2012 (UTC)