Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Jat'ho

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Jat'ho

  • Nominated by: Coruscantfan (Talk) 19:57, November 4, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: A little weak minded 2

(3 ACs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. Be sure to remember sourcing the P & T. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 22:04, November 14, 2012 (UTC)
  2. Good work. Commander Code-8 To say hi, press 42 21:06, December 10, 2012 (UTC)
  3. Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 02:38, December 16, 2012 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Dat'ho. IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 00:50, December 20, 2012 (UTC)
  5. Mwa ha ha.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 01:29, December 20, 2012 (UTC)
  6. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 15:03, December 21, 2012 (UTC)
  7. ACvote Good job on both. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:43, December 28, 2012 (UTC)

Object

CC-8
  • The last three sentences of the bio all have "the two officers" in them. See if you can change the repetition a bit
    • Done.
  • I've also made a minor change which you might need to check. That's it. Commander Code-8 To say hi, press 42 08:50, December 10, 2012 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • My objection is basically the same as for Tobyl. I'm not fully understanding the significance of their mission to capture Lon Shevu and Ben Skywalker. A little clarification on Jobyl's allegiance and purpose of the abduction mission would be beneficial.
    • Done.
  • It's not strictly necessary to repeat his species and gender and onset of both the Biography and the P/T. I would suggest removing one. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:53, December 22, 2012 (UTC)
    • Done.
      • I replaced the bit about him being an "older" Arconan into the Bio. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:43, December 28, 2012 (UTC)
    • Perhaps this will be an easier way to satisfy first objection: I think what's really confusing me is the article saying he was part of a "Galactic Alliance Guard operation to capture GAG Captain...etc." That makes it sound like he's part of the GAG and is capturing his own captain. We wouldn't describe a Rebel mission to infiltrate the Death Star, for example, as an "Imperial operation" -- we would describe it as a Rebel operation. Maybe just reword those parts to say "part of an operation to capture Galactic Alliance Guard Captain...etc." Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:57, December 22, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:43, December 28, 2012 (UTC)