Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Jasso Toryn

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Jasso Toryn

• Nominated by: Jinzler (talk) 21:39, November 1, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: A senator

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Looks good. 501st dogma^(talk) 00:34, November 2, 2012 (UTC)
2. lolmollycoddled Best replacement word ever. XD MasterFred^(Whatever) 21:25, November 5, 2012 (UTC)
3. Sends his daughter to safety ... on Nar Shaddaa. Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 10:33, November 13, 2012 (UTC)
4. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:15, November 15, 2012 (UTC)
5. —Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 17:38, November 19, 2012 (UTC)

Object

• "Overprotective" seems a little POV to me in the P&T. That's all I got. MasterFred^(Whatever) 19:47, November 2, 2012 (UTC)
  • Rephrased, thanks for taking a look at the article --Jinzler (talk) 21:16, November 5, 2012 (UTC)

Toprawa

• The source does not place a comma in the "Oh dear" sentence in the Bio quote? Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 23:55, November 14, 2012 (UTC)
  • No, it doesn't. In fact, the source actually presents that particular quote as "It is far too dangerous Oh dear. If only the Senator had not sent us here", and I am assuming in the article that a full stop was intended between "dangerous" and "Oh", because of the capitalization of the letter "O". To be honest, this is a classic example of a case where the Living Force writers did to punctuation what Dave Filoni has done to continuity. --Jinzler (talk) 22:08, November 15, 2012 (UTC)
    • Ba-ZING! Understood. :P Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:15, November 15, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 17:40, November 19, 2012 (UTC)