Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Jarell

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Jarell

• Nominated by: Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 12:36, 10 September 2008 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: ... if there is one at all.

(+5)

Support

1. That was quick :D Great piece - Kingpin13^{Cantina Battle Ground} 13:15, 10 September 2008 (UTC)
2. Graestan^(Talk) 15:26, 14 September 2008 (UTC)
3. Vive all species GAs! Darth Xadún^{(Consult the Holocron)} 19:50, 15 September 2008 (UTC)
4. Soresumakashi 12:03, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
5. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:58, 25 September 2008 (UTC)

Oppose

1. Kingpin:
   • Seems good, just two things. Firstly, could you reword the start of “Biology and appearance”, I don’t understand if they can have all three colours or if they can have just one (or both). I see in the image it’s purple and white but please reword.
     • Rewritten - hopefully it's clearer now.
   • Secondly shouldn’t the “Sources” section be renamed “Appearances”? Otherwise a great article. - Kingpin13^{Cantina Battle Ground} 12:57, 10 September 2008 (UTC)
     • No, since the Jarell do not appear in a narrative piece of work. Information from The DarkStryder Campaign is all behind the scenes bio information, and the Vision of the Future reference is to the language only. They do not technically "appear" in those works. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 13:11, 10 September 2008 (UTC)
2. Toprawa:
   • The first concern I have after perusing the article is that you alternate between pluralizing them as "the Jarell" and "Jarells." Are you sure that either/or is correct? Can we not choose one for consistency? Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:05, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
     • Rechecked the source, and Jarells is the term used, so all appropriate instances altered I believe. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 07:43, 25 September 2008 (UTC)

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