Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Jae Akura

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Jae Akura

• Nominated by: Grunny ^(Talk) 11:51, 14 June 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: WookieeProject Ambitious Legacy continues

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. Good work, Grunny. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 12:03, 14 June 2009 (UTC)
2. Great work. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Jujiggum) 14:39, 14 June 2009 (UTC)
3. Well done. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 15:02, 14 June 2009 (UTC)
4. Mauser^Comlink 15:05, 14 June 2009 (UTC)
5. Excellence. CC7567 ^(talk) 23:12, 14 June 2009 (UTC)
6. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 09:42, 19 June 2009 (UTC)

Object

1. Mauser:
   • His hair looks like black to me.
     • Agreed, changed.
   • In the infobox: add Skull Squadron to affiliation?
     • Added.
   • "Jae "Storm" Akura...": can it be changed to "Jae Akura, nicknamed "Storm""?
     • I'd prefer not to, since the quotation shows it's a nickname and I don't like to break flow when it's not necessary :).
   • "rescue... Hosk Trey'lis from the Sith": maybe change to more specific "From the Temple of the Sith"?
     • Changed.
   • If you create the article for Helot-class transport, it would be appreciated, although not required.
     • I'm going to create it tomorrow :-).
   • Those objections are all rather minor, since the article looks great already. Mauser^Comlink
     • Thanks for the review, Mauser :-). Grunny ^(Talk) 14:59, 14 June 2009 (UTC)
2. Just one: "an order came in from Moff Yage ordering Skull Squadron to abort their mission. The order had been arranged by Calixte to allow her to rescue her son. The Skulls were displeased with the orders..." Can the "orders" be varied in word choice? CC7567 ^(talk) 21:54, 14 June 2009 (UTC)
   • Varied :-). Grunny ^(Talk) 23:10, 14 June 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:34, 21 June 2009 (UTC)