Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/J1-P0

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J1-P0

  • Nominated by: Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 15:19, December 10, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Just an old CA I found that needed some fixing.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 18:18, December 10, 2014 (UTC)
  2. Impressive. Most impressive.AV-6R7User talk:AV-6R7 23:52, December 11, 2014 (UTC)
  3. ACvote IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 01:12, December 16, 2014 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:43, December 16, 2014 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Smooth. 1358 (Talk) 21:02, December 17, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Jang
  • "during the Galactic Civil War fought between the Galactic Empire and the Alliance to Restore the Republic." It's rather unnecessary and fluffy to give the GCW context when it's a well known civil war.
    • I explicitly mention the Alliance to Restore the Republic to indicate that the droid appeared during the time when it was the Rebellion fighting the Empire and not the New Republic.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 23:50, December 11, 2014 (UTC)
  • "During the Galactic Civil War after Woodle's retirement, the droid spent time standing alongside its master outside of the spaceport located in the city of Theed on the planet Naboo." Can't you just say by the Theed Spaceport's entrance? or just outside of the Theed Spaceport? Seems rather wordy and unnecessary to mention where the spaceport is located.
  • Since you said "who was owned by" in the intro, check the bts's first sentence: "that was featured in". JangFett (Talk) 23:10, December 11, 2014 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • Preliminary objection: Since J1-P0 is not mentioned in NEGTD, reference 1 should explain in a manual ref note how/why the information you cite to that source can work for this character. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:20, December 16, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:02, December 17, 2014 (UTC)