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Interdictor-class

  • Nominated by: --Vitus InfinitusTalk 02:08, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: This is the true Interdictor-class Star Destroyer, not this imposter.
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:AMB

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. Looks good to me! — YakovChaimTzvi ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol (talk) 02:23, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
  2. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 07:02, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
  3. ACvote MasterFredCommerce Guild(talk) 10:49, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Copy-edit. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 19:11, 5 December 2021 (UTC)
  5. ACvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 03:54, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

Object

UberSoldat
  • The image in the body is extremely blurry. Please acquire a higher quality shot.
    • This will be a bit difficult, I'll let you know if/when I'm able to get an HD image. --Vitus InfinitusTalk 19:16, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
      • Managed to get an HD screenshot from a friend. Unfortunately it's still pretty dark since the bridge Karius is at doesn't produce much light, and it's more in the corner of the Windfall. I've brightened it up the best that I could. --Vitus InfinitusTalk 22:29, 27 August 2021 (UTC)
        • What about the infobox? In-game screenshots will always be preferred over Youtube captures. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 06:29, 28 August 2021 (UTC)
          • Okay, I'll let you know! --Vitus InfinitusTalk 13:40, 28 August 2021 (UTC)
          • Done. I tried editing the image to increase the brightness but that only makes it worse. I think the game is darker on Oculus Quest 2 compared to the original Oculus Quest --Vitus InfinitusTalk 14:11, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
  • BTS needs to document SW.com article appearance prior to game's release. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 08:06, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Full publication dates required for comic and magazine issues in BTS, if available. Writer and illustrator needed for the comic. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 08:18, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
  • On the Front Lines does not have BBY/ABY dates, so the date note needs more elaboration.
  • Please implement {{FFCite}} for Ref 10. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 11:08, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
  • I'd like you to investigate everything here as well as any promotional material that may not be listed to spot potential appearances. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 15:38, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
  • I would move the Karius image down to History, enlarge it, and left-align it.
  • Currently, the first date note does not connect Secret Cargo and On the Front Lines together. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 10:08, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
  • How's the update coming along? The article content hasn't been touched since the start of the month. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 10:30, 6 November 2021 (UTC)
Braha'tok-class
  • In Heir to the Jedi, during the passage where Luke is intercepted by an Interdictor cruiser, it mentions how Interdictor cruisers had stopped being produced and that the Empire was now putting gravity projectors in Star Destroyers. This seems like a reference to the Interdictor-class being produced in favour over the cruisers. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 10:12, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
  • The second history paragraph has a few issues:
    • Three sentences start with "after", it'd be better for only one of them to do that.
    • You refer to "Admiral Karius" twice in two consecutive sentences, I'd like to see at least the second instance altered.
    • Similar with the above point, you also got two sentences ending with "the Interdictor." Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 08:48, 27 August 2021 (UTC)
OOM
  • Is there a reason why some of the components aren't given numbers in the "Card Trader" ref?
  • Similarly, if those components require confirmation from another source, so should the gravity well projectors. OOM 224 17:03, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
    • They do not require other confirmation, but we can see in the game that there are four gravity well projectors. --Vitus InfinitusTalk 13:40, 28 September 2021 (UTC)
      • Two bulbs at the top of a Star Destroyer isn't apparent to viwers to be in fact deflector shield generators; this type of info comes from reference material, so they require confirmation. The same goes for the gravity well projectors, since 1) the game doesn't actually say that they're gravity well generators and 2) that finding is based on our knowledge of other Star Wars designs. OOM 224 17:08, 6 October 2021 (UTC)
        • Hey OOM, I'm struggling with how I can explain that the domes are in fact deflector shield generators. The domes we see in Vader Immortal are identical to the Card Trader ISD blueprints, so I'm not sure on what else I can add. As for the gravity well projectors, I added in a ref note but I'm not sure how else to word it. I thought it was sufficient for a duck test, just how if a ship has what appears to be a propelling device at the rear we can deduce that its an engine. --Vitus InfinitusTalk 20:24, 6 October 2021 (UTC)
          • The deflector shield generators part is fine then. I was more so pointing out that a ref note is needed for gravity well projectors in the same vein as needing the existing ref note confirming the engine models, deflector domes etc. on a Star Destroyer. For the gravity well projectors ref here, it's got the explanation down and is good to go for the most part, so I'll strike for now. OOM 224 20:35, 6 October 2021 (UTC)
Macaroni-class
Fred strikes back
  • In the third sentence of the intro, "As an Interdictor vessel..." indicates that what follows applies to all Interdictor vessels. Does "four gravity well projectors and was 1,600 meters in length" indeed apply to all types of Interdictor vessels?
  • You capitalize "Interdictor vessel" in the intro but switch back and forth in the body. MasterFredCommerce Guild(talk) 22:24, 17 November 2021 (UTC)

Comments

  • Not going to make this an official objection. But there is no reason for the smaller image with the transparent background. It is the identical image to File:InterdictorClassSD-EGTW.jpg, therefore, the canon source should be added to that image file, and that higher quality image should be placed in the inbox. - JMAS Jolly Trooper Hey, it's me! 12:28, 1 November 2021 (UTC)
    • Do you know if the image from EGTW has a black background? If not, I can remove that and then CSD the newer version. --Vitus InfinitusTalk 04:03, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Are you done with the major edit that had you place Inuse? JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 22:32, 8 November 2021 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 03:54, 6 December 2021 (UTC)