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Inoke
- Nominated by: Panther436 (talk) 19:43, 7 January 2024 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Probably related to Snoke
- Date Archived: 12:40, 27 January 2024 (UTC)
- Final word count: 496 words (83 introduction, 348 body, 65 behind the scenes)
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Support
Commander Code-8 Hello There! 13:05, 26 January 2024 (UTC)- —spookywillowwtalk 05:50, 27 January 2024 (UTC)
- Lewisr (talk) 05:55, 27 January 2024 (UTC)
OOM 224 (he/him) 10:31, 27 January 2024 (UTC)- DarthSkyll (talk) 12:39, 27 January 2024 (UTC)
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I'd like the intro to mention that Graf hired the brothers to assassinate ShoThe bio should also mention the outcome of the fight after Inoke's deathCommander Code-8 Hello There! 08:03, 17 January 2024 (UTC)If Inoke's voice actor in the audio drama is uncredited that should be mentioned in the BTSCommander Code-8 Hello There! 08:05, 17 January 2024 (UTC)- All addressed. Opted for "unidentified" in the Bts because of the high likelihood that the VA is credited, just not as this character Panther436 (talk) 18:04, 17 January 2024 (UTC)
- If I may chime in, having listened to the drama a while back, I'm can almost say for certain the credits listed on the drama's page are accurate. I would go with "uncredited" here. UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:38, 17 January 2024 (UTC)
- I don't think that changes anything. The actor voicing Inoke in this case is one of the actors credited, they're just not credited as this character. (And it sounds like James Fouhey who has been credited as ensemble). I changed it to "was not identified" which I like a lot more here since uncredited by definition implies that the actor was not credited at all, which we don't know to be true. This is not a case like an extra in a film where we know they're uncredited. Panther436 (talk) 23:23, 17 January 2024 (UTC)
- I think unspecified would be a neater word to use, given that it's highly likely that Fouhey was the voice actor. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 12:55, 25 January 2024 (UTC)
- Works for me, changed Panther436 (talk) 23:59, 25 January 2024 (UTC)
- I think unspecified would be a neater word to use, given that it's highly likely that Fouhey was the voice actor. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 12:55, 25 January 2024 (UTC)
- I don't think that changes anything. The actor voicing Inoke in this case is one of the actors credited, they're just not credited as this character. (And it sounds like James Fouhey who has been credited as ensemble). I changed it to "was not identified" which I like a lot more here since uncredited by definition implies that the actor was not credited at all, which we don't know to be true. This is not a case like an extra in a film where we know they're uncredited. Panther436 (talk) 23:23, 17 January 2024 (UTC)
- If I may chime in, having listened to the drama a while back, I'm can almost say for certain the credits listed on the drama's page are accurate. I would go with "uncredited" here. UberSoldat93
- All addressed. Opted for "unidentified" in the Bts because of the high likelihood that the VA is credited, just not as this character Panther436 (talk) 18:04, 17 January 2024 (UTC)
OOM
Nice work. My copy-edit here. It would be good to see some variation with the word "quickly," which the article currently uses a few times.OOM 224 (he/him) 18:40, 26 January 2024 (UTC)- Changed Panther436 (talk) 01:15, 27 January 2024 (UTC)
Lew
Per pages like J'Quille, John D. Branon, the Force-sensitivity mention seems to not need to be in the PT and instead in the powers/abilities sectionLewisr (talk) 04:14, 27 January 2024 (UTC)- That's fine, moved Panther436 (talk) 05:42, 27 January 2024 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 12:40, 27 January 2024 (UTC)