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Infernum

  • Nominated by: NBDani TeamFireballLogo-Collider(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 23:49, 19 May 2025 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: 5/12 GANs for the year and another soul for WP:Inq - Still in the process of acquiring the Soule comics in physical form, so for now the Index will be incomplete :(
  • Date Archived: 20:04, 14 June 2025 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 597 words (84 introduction, 476 body, 37 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 554 words (66 introduction, 451 body, 37 behind the scenes)
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Support votes

  1. ACvote Wok142 (talk) 01:30, 27 May 2025 (UTC)
  2. ACvote But hey, another part of WP:INQ:P Lewisr (talk) 05:55, 31 May 2025 (UTC)
  3. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 00:56, 2 June 2025 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 20:04, 14 June 2025 (UTC)

Objections

Wok
  • I believe Darth Vader needs some context in the intro
  • Mentioning the shuttle's destruction in the intro would be good to add as well
  • Was trying to find a way to link Invasion of Mon Cala in the sentence initially describing Vader and the Inqs going to the planet, since that was one of the main actions of the invasion prior to the Battle of Dac City part of it. Any ideas for that?
    • I initially didn't link it because the Inquisitors and Vader were 100% there just to find Ferran Barr and only battled in Battle of Dac City cause proximity. But I do suppose Tarkin and the Mon Calamari viewed it as part of the invasion so I've added it to "traveled to Mon Cala" I couldn't find a better spot. Maaaaybe to negotiation, cause it did begin as negotiations? NBDani TeamFireballLogo-Collider(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 01:24, 23 May 2025 (UTC)
      • Yea it's a bit of a funky one, my main idea was just adding it to "traveled" as well but I think I have a new idea. What if you linked it where you currently link Battle of Dac City and then move the Dac link to the next sentence at "While Imperial forces battled against Mon Cala's military"? Wok142 (talk) 09:11, 23 May 2025 (UTC)
  • For the final bit in the History, I think mentioning how the Infernum was destroyed as the entire city was being wiped out is a good detail to have. Wok142 (talk) 22:00, 22 May 2025 (UTC)
    • Reworded and swapped a better image in. How's that? NBDani TeamFireballLogo-Collider(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 01:24, 23 May 2025 (UTC)
      • Looks good! Wok142 (talk) 09:11, 23 May 2025 (UTC)
  • One more tiny thing but, it appears Telvar has the title of Ambassador, so that can be used instead of diplomat to reflect precise title Telvar is referred to by. Wok142 (talk) 09:11, 23 May 2025 (UTC)

Comments

  • Nothing in the comic shows that the ship was destroyed with the tidal wave. So I removed that assumption (From this and other pages I believe). There's a Zeta that appears in a later comic issue, but do to evidence from the De Agostini Encyclopedias and Rise of the Red Blades, I'm treating that shuttle as a different ship. NBDani TeamFireballLogo-Collider(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 23:49, 19 May 2025 (UTC)
    • Reviewing the comic again for another article, I spotted the panel depicting the Infernum in the wave's path. Sorry for missing that :( NBDani TeamFireballLogo-Collider(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 14:37, 22 May 2025 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:04, 14 June 2025 (UTC)