Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Ilwizzt

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Ilwizzt

  • Nominated by: --Eyrezer 10:39, March 2, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Go, obscure alien species from RPG! Skippy Farlstendoiro 08:27, March 5, 2010 (UTC)
  2. Discussed in IRC. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is the truth) 01:38, March 7, 2010 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Green Tentacle (Talk) 02:16, March 7, 2010 (UTC)
  4. Don't forget that Ssi-ruu is the singular, Ssi-ruuk the plural, and Ssi-ruuvi the genitive. Graestan(Talk) 23:25, March 7, 2010 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir 07:13, March 9, 2010 (UTC)
  6. ACvote Grunny (Talk) 07:57, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Object

  1. They won't talk. Launch Skippy. Object at will (p95)
    • I understand you should only link terms in quotes if they are not mentioned (thus not linked) elsewhere in the text?
      • Tick.
    • Major Brco was an Ilwizzt and a Major Too obvious. Reword.
      • Tick.
    • Brco only initiated military activities after trying to communicate with the invaders. This could or could not be important enough to mention (Apparently Ilwizzit do not attack as the first option).
      • Tick.
    • G'rho was a Chandrilan colony world (p93). I think that should be mentioned; Ilwizzt mixed with Chandrillans.
    • Despite the Ilwizzt's efforts ... Despite a brief resistance You begin two successive sentences with "Despite". Please reword one.
      • Tick. Thanks for the review. --Eyrezer 22:04, March 4, 2010 (UTC)
    • Skippy Farlstendoiro 11:05, March 2, 2010 (UTC)
  2. Soresu
    • The opening quote needs a better description, otherwise its confusing trying to fathom what it means.
    • a gas grenades Did they throw one or more than one?
    • The Ssi-ruuvi Imperium was composed of the reptilian Ssi-ruu and was located within a globular star-cluster withim Wild Space. and Notwithstanding a brief resistance of a few dozen colonists,[7] virtually all of the planet's colonists were eliminated by the Ssi-ruu and enteched—a process in which a sentient's life energy was absorbed into battery coils. IMO, not needed, considering that the species has not involvement in either events, nor are they required for the understanding of events that actually are important. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 23:37, March 6, 2010 (UTC)
      • First and second objections fixed. The third discussed in IRC. --Eyrezer 01:36, March 7, 2010 (UTC)
  3. Toprawa:
    • Can we source the intro quote to the more-specific Strangers with Sweets?
    • Concerning the image caption in the "History" section, judging from basic inference in relation to the story, the "Human" in the image is definitely intended to be Dev Sibwarra. I would suggest rewording the caption to reflect this. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:12, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

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