Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/I'nah's crew

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I'nah's crew

Nominated by: —spookywilloww^talk 05:06, 30 March 2024 (UTC)
Nomination comments: Hmm. How many more SANs from the I'nah-connected stuff…
Date Archived: 17:05, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
Final word count: 470 words (101 introduction, 337 body, 32 behind the scenes)
Word count at nomination time: 460 words (100 introduction, 328 body, 32 behind the scenes)
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~~The intro says "I'nah later also decided to travel to Valo" but the "also" doesn't make sense as it isn't mentioned that Zyle had gone there prior.~~
a Trandoshan Nihil similarly protested that the scientist was needed on their cruiser." - so, does the Trandoshan think the scientist was or wasn't needed? If it's the latter, I think that wording should be used. If it's the former, which is suggested by the phrasing, then it's not "similarly" since they're disagreeing with I'nah. Tommy-Macaroni (he/they) 10:50, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
- Tweaked above two.—spookywilloww^talk 14:44, 23 April 2024 (UTC)

~~Would be better to explicitly mention mycopram where you first bring it up instead of pipelinking it, since the name gets used later on anyway.~~ Imperators II^(Talk) 07:44, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
- Tweaked and did the intro to match as well for consistency.—spookywilloww^talk 16:53, 29 April 2024 (UTC)

I'nah has a number of quotes, but none of them really illustrate the Description section in a meaningful way other than putting another quote in for the sake of it. I imagine it's similar to how Jarl's crew skips a Description quote.—spookywilloww^talk 05:07, 30 March 2024 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 17:05, 29 April 2024 (UTC)