Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/House Alde embassy

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House Alde embassy

• Nominated by: Cade Calrayn 18:08, August 27, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Project Hero continues

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 00:54, September 3, 2013 (UTC)
2. 501st dogma^(talk) 22:13, September 16, 2013 (UTC)
3. Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 20:51, September 23, 2013 (UTC)
4. 1358 ^(Talk) 17:36, September 28, 2013 (UTC)
5. CC7567 ^(talk) 19:05, September 28, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Cav

• Was there damage to the structure during the weapons strike? - Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 08:54, September 11, 2013 (UTC)
  • None that I saw, other than a scorch mark on the floor. Cade Calrayn 23:39, September 15, 2013 (UTC)

501

• It should be mentioned in the intro how the embassy was on Alderaan. 501st dogma^(talk) 23:37, September 15, 2013 (UTC)
  • Done. Cade Calrayn 23:39, September 15, 2013 (UTC)

Attack of the Clone

• It should be clarified in both the body and intro (or at least the body) that the Death Mark was specifically in orbit of Alderaan. It does get mentioned as an "orbital" weapon, but I think you can be more specific. CC7567 ^(talk) 18:59, September 28, 2013 (UTC)
  • Done. Cade Calrayn 19:04, September 28, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:05, September 28, 2013 (UTC)