Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Horak-mul

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Horak-mul

• Nominated by: "For England, James?" "No. For me."
• Nomination comments: IFYLOFD ^{(You will pay the price for your lack of vision!)} 01:30, September 29, 2009 (UTC)

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. Ha-ha! Cool GoldenEye reference. Fits Horak-mul--Jedi Kasra (talk) 22:52, September 29, 2009 (UTC)
   • Glad you noticed. ;) IFYLOFD ^{(You will pay the price for your lack of vision!)} 23:29, October 3, 2009 (UTC)
2. Didn't get it. Something to do with that guy.... James Bond... was it? SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 05:07, September 30, 2009 (UTC)
   • Strike that last comment. It was on TV yesterday. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 01:52, October 10, 2009 (UTC)
3. CC7567 ^(talk) 02:41, October 22, 2009 (UTC)
4. --Eyrezer 20:38, October 27, 2009 (UTC)
5. Nayayen^(talk) 23:56, November 1, 2009 (UTC)
6. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 00:02, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

Object

1. Attack of the Clone
   • Please watch your linking, particularly to events. I rather doubt that all of the related battles are linked. Also, if you're indeed trying to say that (what is now) the third paragraph details the Battle of Khar Delba, then it's absolutely pointless waiting to make the reference at the very end as you do now.
     • Addressed. IFYLOFD ^{(You will pay the price for your lack of vision!)} 23:42, October 21, 2009 (UTC)
   • His cybernetic eye is nowhere except in the infobox. Mentioning it at the end of the bio does not alleviate this issue if it's not clarified what it was. CC7567 ^(talk) 01:52, October 13, 2009 (UTC)
     • That poses a dilemma; in the Tales of the Jedi comics no significance is placed on the eye, it isn't shown to have any powers or benefits, or that he even lost his eye in the first place. What would you like me to do?
       • I guess it's fine the way it is, then. CC7567 ^(talk) 02:41, October 22, 2009 (UTC)
2. From the Moffship of Grand Moff Tranner:
   • Place of death needs to be noted in infobox.
     • Addressed.
   • Context on Valley of the Dark Lords.
     • Addressed.
   • His artificial eye should be mentioned in the P&T section.
     • Addressed.
   • That's all. Good work. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 13:39, October 23, 2009 (UTC)
3. Same issue as my objection for Gorrm. He didn't appear in Conquest and Unification so he can't be listed as appearing in the whole story arc. Or am I incorrect and this is actually something that is always done with TOTJ? Nayayen^(talk) 20:56, October 27, 2009 (UTC)
   • Addressed.

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 04:49, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

• Can you add another pic to the body? --Eyrezer 20:38, October 27, 2009 (UTC)