Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Honi

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Honi

  • Nominated by: Tinwe(comlink) 13:41, February 11, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Yet another prospective CAN becomes a GAN instead.

(3 ACs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. Very nice work, but a mention that Qui-Gon helped rescuing her would be appropiate. Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:40, February 12, 2012 (UTC)
    • Yeah, I initially left Qui-Gon out because I had some trouble including him in a way that wasn't overly context-y, but I think I got it this time. Tinwe(comlink) 11:40, February 12, 2012 (UTC)
  2. graestan(talk) 13:01, February 13, 2012 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 09:44, February 14, 2012 (UTC)
  4. Honi, I shrunk the Padawan. ~SavageBOB sig 13:55, February 15, 2012 (UTC)
  5. Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 05:25, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
  6. ACvote Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 22:06, February 26, 2012 (UTC)
  7. ACvote—Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 03:13, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Object

graestan
  • Correct me if I'm wrong, but I was under the impression Obi-Wan wasn't anyone's Padawan before this happened, just an Initiate who had not been chosen to become a Padawan. Please change the wording if this is so and let me know if it is not.
    • Correct you I shall. ;) Obi-Wan became Qui-Gon's Padawan in The Hidden Past, the third of the JA books. Obi-Wan left the Jedi Order in the fifth, The Defenders of the Dead, to aid the Young in the Melida-Daan civil war, but realized that his place was with the Jedi in the next installment, The Uncertain Path. In The Captive Temple he has arrived back to the Temple with Qui-Gon, but is not officially accepted back to the Order by the Jedi Council (and Qui-Gon hasn't really forgiven him yet either).
  • Also, if Qui-Gon did anything specific during the rescue, please explain it more. As it stands it just kinda reads like he showed up and stood around rubbernecking.
    • Well, he didn't really do anything special. He did just kind of show up and Obi-Wan handed him the kids one by one as soon as he got them out of the turbolift car, as the article states.
  • A qualifier that Ali Alann was the clan instructor and not her direct Master as a Padawan would be appropriate in the infobox. graestan(talk) 00:32, February 13, 2012 (UTC)
    • Added. Thanks for the review! Tinwe(comlink) 07:53, February 13, 2012 (UTC)
Savaged…
  • "It was later found out..." Can you rephrase this active voice to say who found out? Other than that, looks golden. ~SavageBOB sig 13:33, February 14, 2012 (UTC)
    • Good catch; reworded. Thanks for taking a look! Tinwe(comlink) 13:29, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 03:13, February 28, 2012 (UTC)