Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/High Flight Squadron

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High Flight Squadron

• Nominated by: Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 18:36, May 17, 2014 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Wanted to do a bit of a memorial for Aaron Allston

(3 ACs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

1. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 13:14, May 21, 2014 (UTC)
2. 501st dogma^(talk) 22:29, May 27, 2014 (UTC)
3. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 12:43, July 15, 2014 (UTC)
4. Nice job. - Brandon Rhea^(talk) 21:09, July 15, 2014 (UTC)
5. Cade Calrayn 17:05, July 18, 2014 (UTC)
6. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk)
7. Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 21:14, July 20, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Lee's charge

• Unsourced redlink in the infobox.
  • The redlink in the infobox still needs to be created. I advise you do the other one too. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 23:00, May 17, 2014 (UTC)
• Context for the Battle Dog in the intro.
• New Republic should be in the affiliation field in the infobox.
• were assigned[2] to the Quasar Fire-class carrier Battle Dog[1] during the Zsinj campaign[2] of 7 ABY,[4] part of General Han Solo's fleet.: Something is missing here.
• led a task force into battle to attack Zsinj's flagship Iron Fist, which was trapped in the system due to sabotage by the double agent Lara Notsil. Antilles led the forces as they: Please vary your word choice a little bit.
  • Is advanced the really the right way to say this? Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 23:00, May 17, 2014 (UTC)
    • Advanced into is better, methinks. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 01:24, May 21, 2014 (UTC)
• What is Selaggis VI? A moon? Same for Adumar.
• IMHO you don't have to mention all the different squadrons when you describe the Adumar battle. Giving the total number of fighters should suffice.
• Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 21:36, May 17, 2014 (UTC)
  • I think I got this all, thanks. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 22:52, May 17, 2014 (UTC)

501st

• Body: Context is needed for the Zsinj campaign. The Warlord himself is not linked to.
• " The New Republic forces set up their attack, but Myn Donos, Wraith Three, ordered them to break off the ambush, suspecting a trap." Did they find the Iron Fist? Right now you have them looking for it, and then suddenly attacking it.
• "During the ensuing maneuvers, High Flight Three was hit by debris and was forced to shut down while Shadow Twelve was killed. As they did so, Iron Fist fired on the asteroids to create a debris shield." I believe the Iron Fist fired before they completed maneuvers, right? It was the debris from the asteroids stuck by the Fist's guns that took out the two I believe.
• Good work. 501st dogma^(talk) 20:50, May 27, 2014 (UTC)
  • All adjusted, thanks. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 21:45, May 27, 2014 (UTC)

Winterz

• Reload infobox. Winterz (talk) 01:10, June 30, 2014 (UTC)
  • Huh, I thought I did that. Thanks. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 01:30, June 30, 2014 (UTC)
    • Still not done, sir. Please, look into the Infobox page and note the missing fields. Winterz (talk) 01:43, June 30, 2014 (UTC)
      • Dude, what are you talking about? I used the preload just a moment ago. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 02:14, June 30, 2014 (UTC)
        • Ugh, nevermind. There was an issue because the "source" link of the infobox's template was directing to a different template than it. My apologies, though it is not exactly my fault. Winterz (talk) 02:25, June 30, 2014 (UTC)

Cadeth

• You jump from a discussion of the Battle Dog and the Hunt for Zsinj to the Battle of Selaggis, and don't say anything about the reason for the squadron's participation or what group they were with. Was the Battle Dog part of Antiles' task force?
  • Added some explanation. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 20:36, July 7, 2014 (UTC)
    • There's still no definitive link between Solo's fleet and Wedge's task force. Cade Calrayn 19:52, July 11, 2014 (UTC)
      • Better? Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 18:22, July 17, 2014 (UTC)
• You're going to have give more context on the nightcloak system.
  • Is that enough? Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 20:36, July 7, 2014 (UTC)
• What was Antilles negotiating?
  • Contextified. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 20:36, July 7, 2014 (UTC)
• "cleared them" - who's them? Cade Calrayn 21:25, July 6, 2014 (UTC)
  • Adressed, thanks. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 20:36, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

Toprawa

• The infobox states that the squadron was formed before 7 ABY, but nothing in the article body mentions this. That being said, I think it would be more accurate for the infobox to say "By 7 ABY," since I think the squadron could just have easily been created in the same year as the Selaggis battle. If you go that route, you don't need to add anything to the article body. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:30, July 19, 2014 (UTC)
  • Good idea, thanks. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 23:44, July 19, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:14, July 20, 2014 (UTC)

1. Thanks to Cav for looking it over for me. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 18:36, May 17, 2014 (UTC)