Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Hawkeye

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Hawkeye

Nominated by: Wok142 (talk) 19:39, 5 November 2024 (UTC)
Nomination comments: Recently learned about the MASH trivia bit and thought that was awesome
Date Archived: 00:10, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
Final word count: 475 words (64 introduction, 339 body, 72 behind the scenes)
Word count at nomination time: 465 words (64 introduction, 339 body, 62 behind the scenes)
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The 21 BBY date in the body and inbox have different references, they should reference the same source, and also specify that "Zillo Beast" is the source for Malastare as the death place. ThrawnChiss7 ^{Assembly Cupola} 19:35, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
- Fixed! Wok142 (talk) 06:55, 10 November 2024 (UTC)

Since it's not actually clear from the episode that Hawkeye was killed and it was only because Trapper later appeared in another episode that was sorted, I think you should include a note to indicate that it was in fact Hawkeye. The Legends page has something which would work to be put in a note to cite, but to replace the Chronicles part with the chronological order list on StarWars.com Lewisr (talk) 20:34, 15 November 2024 (UTC)
~~I think it'd be notable to include the part about the wilhelm scream mentioned in the trivia gallery~~ Lewisr (talk) 20:34, 15 November 2024 (UTC)
- BTS updated. Wok142 (talk) 21:41, 15 November 2024 (UTC)
  - Sorry if it wasn't clear, I meant that it should be in a reference note, did update that now, and removed the BTS image because there wasn't much room left after the removal Lewisr (talk) 05:20, 16 November 2024 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 00:10, 25 November 2024 (UTC)