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Hask
- Nominated by: Commander Code-8 Hello There! 10:47, 22 February 2022 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: The Stark Hyperspace War feels so complicated to write about
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- Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 14:15, 6 March 2022 (UTC)
- Samonic
(Talk) 08:54, 14 March 2022 (UTC) 
UberSoldat93 
(talk) 11:37, 21 March 2022 (UTC)
JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:07, 5 April 2022 (UTC)- MasterFred(talk) (he/him) 18:35, 12 April 2022 (UTC)
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UberSoldat
With 4 evenly-sized paragraphs in the bio, let's see some sectioning, and another image and quote along with it.- Done
- For the second image, you currently mention multiple subjects with no indication of what the image is actually depicting. UberSoldat93 (talk) 03:35, 11 March 2022 (UTC)
- Done Commander Code-8 Hello There! 08:37, 14 March 2022 (UTC)
- For the second image, you currently mention multiple subjects with no indication of what the image is actually depicting. UberSoldat93
- Done
Was the Republic name retroactively applied to this comic issue?UberSoldat93 (talk) 11:59, 9 March 2022 (UTC)
- No, removed that part Commander Code-8 Hello There! 11:51, 10 March 2022 (UTC)
Succession box: Goes after Sources and needs to be fully referenced.UberSoldat93 (talk) 03:45, 15 March 2022 (UTC)
- Ended up having to connect it to Galacctic Battlegrounds without planning to :P
- Is the date supported by the comic? UberSoldat93 (talk) 04:42, 17 March 2022 (UTC)
- So each comic starts off with a statement that the events take place 30 years before Yavin, but its only in the first one that they specify that the flashbacks occurred fourteen years earlier Commander Code-8 Hello There! 08:54, 17 March 2022 (UTC)
- Would like the note connected to the subject as well, since it's also used in the succession box. UberSoldat93 (talk) 03:28, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
- Done Commander Code-8 Hello There! 07:38, 21 March 2022 (UTC)
- Would like the note connected to the subject as well, since it's also used in the succession box. UberSoldat93
- So each comic starts off with a statement that the events take place 30 years before Yavin, but its only in the first one that they specify that the flashbacks occurred fourteen years earlier Commander Code-8 Hello There! 08:54, 17 March 2022 (UTC)
- Is the date supported by the comic? UberSoldat93
- Ended up having to connect it to Galacctic Battlegrounds without planning to :P
Much of "Personality and traits" is sourced to an issue of the comic that doesn't appear to be listed as an appearance.UberSoldat93 (talk) 03:51, 15 March 2022 (UTC)
- Corrected Commander Code-8 Hello There! 02:58, 16 March 2022 (UTC)
Context for Wookieepedia (I'm serious).UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:39, 8 April 2022 (UTC)
- Clearly an important addition, done Commander Code-8 Hello There! 10:09, 8 April 2022 (UTC)
Fred strikes back
I'm not convinced that revision of the Wook article actually claims he was the viceroy.- It's only because of the succession box, didn't come in the article's text until a few years later Commander Code-8 Hello There! 23:54, 10 April 2022 (UTC)
- I suppose I can accept that as it stating he was viceroy.
- It's only because of the succession box, didn't come in the article's text until a few years later Commander Code-8 Hello There! 23:54, 10 April 2022 (UTC)
Can we get some context for which Star Wars comic series in the first sentence of the Bts?MasterFred(talk) (he/him) 05:03, 10 April 2022 (UTC)
- I've added the year it started though I know it might be confusing Commander Code-8 Hello There! 23:54, 10 April 2022 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:35, 12 April 2022 (UTC)
The discrepancy in the article has unfolded a bit more and I don't have the time to totally try to resolve it right now, and I'd like to get some other input first anyway.
- "he conspired with Iaco Stark and Hask of the Trade Federation to engineer a profitable bacta shortage…" - Adol Bel's encyclopedia entry that I only just thought to check
- "He formed an alliance with Adol Bel of the Xucphra Corporation, and developed a plan to starve the Old Republic of bacta and reap huge profits. The plans were thwarted by Iaco Stark, whose Commercial Combine began raiding the few bacta convoys leaving Thyferra, then reselling the bacta at cheaper prices." - Hask's encyclopedia entry
- "The bacta thefts were a ruse cooked up between Stark and the Trade Federation's viceroy" - The Essential Atlas p. 140, admittedly a little different to what I had recorded in the BTS at this time so my bad.
My thinking is that the best way to resolve this is to assume that Stark was involved in the bacta shortage on Thyferra but that he went rogue after that. I don't think there's anyway to rationalize the Atlas's statements given that the comic depicts an attack on a bacta transport clearly. Additionally the article has said that Hask was the viceroy prior to The Essential Guide to Warfare's publication, so I might acknowledge that in the BTS Commander Code-8 Hello There! 13:32, 4 April 2022 (UTC)
- Article now includes this info Commander Code-8 Hello There! 10:16, 6 April 2022 (UTC)