Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Haru and Saku's mother

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Haru and Saku's mother

  • Nominated by: CometSmudge (talk) 15:30, 19 August 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 23:40, 2 November 2024 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 324 words (59 introduction, 209 body, 56 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 306 words (54 introduction, 204 body, 48 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:Visions

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 00:45, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
  2. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 15:22, 4 September 2024 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Imperators II(Talk) 08:54, 30 October 2024 (UTC)
  4. Xd1358 (Talk) 13:18, 2 November 2024 (UTC)
  5. Booply (talk) 23:38, 2 November 2024 (UTC)

Object

Lew
  • I think there's some room for an image in the biography Lewisr (talk) 02:11, 21 August 2024 (UTC)
  • It seems like the villager is notable for a page Lewisr (talk) 02:11, 21 August 2024 (UTC)
    • Addressed both. For the image, I used one from the flashback since that's the only shot that has both sisters without Asu in between them, but I'm fine with changing it if you think either including Asu or leaving out one sister would be better. CometSmudge (talk) 16:05, 21 August 2024 (UTC)
      • Current works for me Lewisr (talk) 00:45, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
Imp
  • Please indicate in the BTS the Visions volume of "The Village Bride". Imperators II(Talk) 10:49, 19 October 2024 (UTC)
  • What indication is there for "The Village Bride" being set during the Imperial Era? Imperators II(Talk) 22:33, 29 October 2024 (UTC)
    • Valco tells F that "the Empire's eyes won't reach you here" CometSmudge (talk) 22:35, 29 October 2024 (UTC)
      • In that case, I'd definitely recommend going with a more explicit wording in the reference note, i.e., that the film is set during the Empire's reign, which Timelines dates to such and such. Otherwise it's currently implying that the film has more explicit timeframe info. Imperators II(Talk) 23:24, 29 October 2024 (UTC)
        • To me that doesn't feel like a meaningful difference in wording, but I changed it, does this work?. CometSmudge (talk) 04:39, 30 October 2024 (UTC)
          • The difference lies in the fact that, taken in isolation, "The Village Bride" does not establish the existence of a specific time period when the Empire reigned as opposed to time periods where it didn't. Imperators II(Talk) 08:54, 30 October 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 23:39, 2 November 2024 (UTC)