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Handa

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. --Talrrivanian JaingHead (Headquarters) 16:57, February 28, 2013 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 02:16, March 4, 2013 (UTC)
  3. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 03:55, March 5, 2013 (UTC)
  4. ACvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 02:30, March 7, 2013 (UTC)
  5. ACvote CC7567 (talk) 20:11, March 7, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Talrrivanian
  • You use the phrase "romantic relationship" a bit to often. Could you find some other ways to say that a few of those times?
  • In the biography, you seem to stray away from the topic of this article: Handa. You get caught up in his padawans' relationship. Try to focus on Handa even if it makes the article shorter. You might have to make this a comprehensive article if you can't find enough info. --Talrrivanian JaingHead (Headquarters) 16:56, February 28, 2013 (UTC)
    • Please try both. As for the second objection, the reaction from both Padawans is relevant to Handa, as it pertains to the consequences of his actions, I think it's brief.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 15:18, February 28, 2013 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • Please reload the infobox. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:19, March 2, 2013 (UTC)
    • Done, I think?—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 21:58, March 2, 2013 (UTC)
      • Nope. Reloading the infobox requires you to actually choose the correct option from the infobox preload dropdown list. Once you click the "Jedi character infobox," it will automatically reload the updated infobox code as presented here. You will notice that the preload code does not match what you currently have in this article. That's what reloading the infobox means. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 16:39, March 3, 2013 (UTC)
  • Given that the "Seventh Battle of Ruusan" is a conjectural title (judging from that article), we should not refer to it as a formal title as such. Please revise to avoid this: "during the Seventh Battle of Ruusan" Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 02:00, March 4, 2013 (UTC)
Floyd has one thing
  • The last sentence of the bio goes on a little too long and should probably be split up. IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 03:20, March 6, 2013 (UTC)
Attack of the Clone
  • This is probably just me because I'm not that familiar with anything outside of the post-Bane and pre-Empire era, but did Handa train Githany and Charny at the same time? It sounds that way in the bio, since his "tenure as Githany's and Charny's Master" is mentioned, but it's not entirely clear. Might be helpful to explicitly clarify this somewhere if it's the case. (If it's not the case, it needs to be clarified that he had separate "tenures" as Githany's Master and Charny's Master.)
    • Done, he trained both at the same time.
  • "and forming a romantic attachment toward each other": any relevance in relation to the Jedi Code that can be mentioned?
    • Done.
  • Judging from the article, the answer seems to be no, but just to make sure: did he have any affiliation with the Galactic Republic that can be listed in the infobox and mentioned elsewhere? CC7567 (talk) 19:52, March 7, 2013 (UTC)
    • The novel doesn't actually say whether he served the Republic in the war or not. Thanks for the review, CC!—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 20:05, March 7, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:11, March 7, 2013 (UTC)