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Halsey

  • Nominated by: Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 20:40, January 23, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Don't let this nom fool you. I still hate TCW.

(5 ACs/2 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote Leeching easy GAs from TCW is no excuse. Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:16, January 25, 2011 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 03:35, January 25, 2011 (UTC)
  3. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 14:58, January 25, 2011 (UTC)
  4. ACvote It's all good, I got one too :P—Tommy 9281 02:50, January 26, 2011 (UTC)
  5. Do not hate the series, hate the makers. Kreivi Wolter 09:14, January 26, 2011 (UTC)
  6. ACvote CC7567 (talk) 07:38, January 29, 2011 (UTC)
  7. Graestan(Talk) 16:19, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Graestan
  • Please turn up the context just a little bit. You don't really need to explain the Clone Wars, but looking at the intro I can tell you that a "civilian" would have some issues understanding what everything is. Graestan(Talk) 23:35, January 25, 2011 (UTC)
    • Added some context on the Clone Wars in both the intro and the bio. I'm not quite sure what else you wanted to see context for in the intro; anything more might mess with the flow, but I'm open to suggestions. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 02:03, January 26, 2011 (UTC)
      • Needed for "acolyte." I'd really go through this whole thing if I were you, there are a number of things a reader who hasn't watched TCW wouldn't understand. Graestan(Talk) 14:12, January 28, 2011 (UTC)
        • I have to admit, I'm confused by this objection. The only reason I used the term "acolyte" is to provide context for Opress, and I'd rather not starting adding context to context. If you would prefer a different word be used in place of "acolyte," I will gladly change it. As to the second part of your objection, I don't quite see what you're referring to; Halsey plays a very minor role in his appearances, and I've tried to keep everything focused more on him. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 21:19, January 28, 2011 (UTC)
          • After discussing the "acolyte" issue with Toprawa, we agreed "apprentice" would be more appropriate. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 21:25, January 28, 2011 (UTC)
            • No, you don't say anything about Opress's allegiance in his first mention. Just that he is an acolyte, but not of what. Graestan(Talk) 15:08, January 29, 2011 (UTC)
            • It's not like the fact that he was an acolyte is as important as the fact that he was Dooku's pupil. Graestan(Talk) 15:10, January 29, 2011 (UTC)
              • I'm just going to go through and fix everything I want fixed myself. It may not be perfect because I am not exactly familiar with the subject matter, and that's why I hadn't done it before. This is just a series of communications snafus. Alright? Graestan(Talk) 15:13, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 16:19, January 29, 2011 (UTC)