Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Halley Kadorto

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Halley Kadorto

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Support

  1. Green Tentacle (Talk) 23:05, 8 February 2008 (UTC)
  2. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 16:47, 10 February 2008 (UTC)
  3. --Eyrezer 22:11, 12 February 2008 (UTC)
  4. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:10, 14 February 2008 (UTC)
  5. Imperialles 00:28, 16 February 2008 (UTC)

Oppose

  1. Toprawa:
    • These sentences are very vague and could be written better. Why were they prone to failure in missions? Inferior pilots? What happened specifically that caused Kadorto to suffer? Technically dead three or four times? Give us a hard number, if available. "During the beginning of the Rebellion, starfighters were prone to failure in missions, something which the Alliance was eventually able to overcome, but this problem caused many fighters to be lost. Kadorto suffered from this problem and was shot up several times, being technically dead on three or four occasions before being revived by a medical droid."
      • Clarified that it was equipment failure. We don't know exactly what happened to him and I've put the three or four bit in quotes since that's as specific as he got. Green Tentacle (Talk) 21:05, 14 February 2008 (UTC)
    • It would be best to add a specific date following this phrase: "before the start of Operation Strike Fear." Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:49, 14 February 2008 (UTC)
      • Added the date of Operation Strike Fear but we have no idea when he actually retired. Green Tentacle (Talk) 21:05, 14 February 2008 (UTC)

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