Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Hali Ke (second nomination)

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Hali Ke

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Too many sentences begin with "Ke," please substitute some of them with alternatives.
- Fixed both. TK-462 (talk) 11:43, 11 October 2022 (UTC)
  - I should've also clarified that there were too any instances of "Ke." We are allowed to use "they" to referred to individuals of unknown gender now. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:45, 14 October 2022 (UTC)
Please document the BTS quote in prose.
- I wasn't entirely sure what you meant here, hopefully I got that right? TK-462 (talk) 11:43, 11 October 2022 (UTC)
  - Nope. Prose here means actual text in the body, not the quote attribution, so Fry's comments need to be documented there. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:45, 14 October 2022 (UTC)
Reviewing: Please take care of underlinking in the future. UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:55, 30 September 2022 (UTC)
- Understood, thank you. TK-462 (talk)`

Objections over 10 days old, and TK hasn't edited since the 11th of October, where he addressed my objections that were also overdue at the time. UberSoldat93 (talk) 17:37, 24 October 2022 (UTC)
OOM 224 17:38, 24 October 2022 (UTC)
1358 ^(Talk) 17:38, 24 October 2022 (UTC)