Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Hafa (second nomination)

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Hafa

• Nominated by: VergenceScatter (talk) 14:34, 7 August 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:Thought I'd fix up this old GA
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Support

1. Minnabird ^(talk) 19:35, 10 August 2021 (UTC)
2. Objections handled via Discord. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 02:45, 12 August 2021 (UTC)
3. UberSoldat93 (talk) 17:18, 15 August 2021 (UTC)
4. OOM 224 16:25, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
5. 1358 ^(Talk) 19:38, 18 August 2021 (UTC)

Object

Minnabird

• "A group of operatives hired by the scientists" — which scientists? Could use clarification here. (Fellow scientists from the university? Friends/colleagues of the dead biologists?) Minnabird ^(talk) 02:26, 10 August 2021 (UTC)
  • The operatives are the PCs. Noted in the BTS. VergenceScatter (talk) 04:30, 10 August 2021 (UTC)
    • I know the operatives are the PCs; I'm unclear on which scientists hired them. (The "the" implies this specific group was introduced before, but the only specific group of scientists mentioned are the ones who died; unless they hired them prior to dying?). Minnabird ^(talk) 10:38, 10 August 2021 (UTC)
      • It's the biologists mentioned in the previous sentence. VergenceScatter (talk) 18:12, 10 August 2021 (UTC)
        • Okay; I'm genuinely not trying to give you a hard time, I just wasn't understanding the sequence of events. It would be clearer to mention that the operatives were hired by the biologists before they died. Minnabird ^(talk) 18:19, 10 August 2021 (UTC)
          • Done. VergenceScatter (talk) 19:30, 10 August 2021 (UTC)
            • Looks great! Minnabird ^(talk) 19:35, 10 August 2021 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• This article pipelinks the article Cassandran Worlds/Legends to "Cassander Worlds," does the source use the latter name?
• Context for Rehemsa.
  • Both fixed.
    • Agricorp is a disambiguation page. UberSoldat93 (talk) 16:29, 15 August 2021 (UTC)
      • Handled via Discord. UberSoldat93 (talk) 17:18, 15 August 2021 (UTC)
• "Before the biologists' deaths, a group of operatives hired by the scientists..." Wait, scientists? Are these the biologists mentioned prior? UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:23, 15 August 2021 (UTC)
  • The biologists and the scientists are the same people. VergenceScatter (talk) 14:52, 15 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Actually, looking at it again, I can see your confusion. Reworded. VergenceScatter (talk) 16:19, 15 August 2021 (UTC)

OOM

• "Before the biologists' deaths, a group of operatives they had hired managed to break into Gabbard's facility and obtain the antidote before they too began to be affected by the nerve agent." Did the operatives get affected by the nerve agent after breaking in, or did they escape that fate? This line doesn't make it clear. OOM 224 08:57, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
  • They became sick from the nerve agent, but because the operatives are the PCs, their specific fate is never given. I haven't noted that in the BTS because it's not relevant to hafa. VergenceScatter (talk) 15:23, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Alright, I see. I've made a copy-edit for clarity there. OOM 224 16:25, 17 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:38, 18 August 2021 (UTC)

• All issues from the previous review have been addressed. VergenceScatter (talk) 14:34, 7 August 2021 (UTC)