- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Gushaz
- Nominated by: Cavalier One
(Squadron channel) 09:15, October 20, 2010 (UTC) - Nomination comments: A building. Not very exciting. Maybe.
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
IRCified. 1358 (Talk) 19:26, October 20, 2010 (UTC)- SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is the truth) 22:05, October 20, 2010 (UTC)
- Clearly the gushaz was not uncovered by the Imperials who did not go insane and did not attack their fellow Imperials. Grand Moff Tranner
(Comlink) 00:29, October 22, 2010 (UTC) - Toprawa and Ralltiir 01:42, October 30, 2010 (UTC)
- Incidentally, Gushaz was also the brand name of a fruit-flavored snack of the early '90s. ~ SavageBob 05:54, October 31, 2010 (UTC)
Object
Toprawa
Specifying who or what removed the Plaque here would be better detail than the generic "it": "In an effort to defeat the Plaque's influence, it was removed from the gushaz"- Done.
Per the preceding objection, if possible please make the corresponding change in the bio as well.- And done again.
Per this long-ago CT, it was decided the "sentient" terminology is preferred in article text over "sapient." Unless there's a good reason for using "sapient," it would probably be best to switch.- Basically, I used the term "sentient" to describe the Plaque. To avoid repetition, I decided to use "sapient" for the alien species. Sentient better describes the Plaque IMO, and its simply a case of removing repetitive wording. I can change it if needed, tho.
- If it's a matter of concern over repetition, it's my unprofessional opinion that the wording does not read repetitively. I think it would work to use sentient for both. Toprawa and Ralltiir 16:47, October 26, 2010 (UTC)
- Both instances of "sapient" changed to "sentient". - Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 08:14, October 29, 2010 (UTC)
- Both instances of "sapient" changed to "sentient". - Cavalier One
- If it's a matter of concern over repetition, it's my unprofessional opinion that the wording does not read repetitively. I think it would work to use sentient for both. Toprawa and Ralltiir 16:47, October 26, 2010 (UTC)
- Basically, I used the term "sentient" to describe the Plaque. To avoid repetition, I decided to use "sapient" for the alien species. Sentient better describes the Plaque IMO, and its simply a case of removing repetitive wording. I can change it if needed, tho.
The BTS describes that the gushaz was first "mentioned" in Artifact of Aaris, but the Appearances list treats it as a full appearance, rather than a mention. If it was only a mention, the first-mention tag should be used instead.Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:52, October 24, 2010 (UTC)- Changed. - Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 11:45, October 24, 2010 (UTC)
- Changed. - Cavalier One
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 06:31, October 31, 2010 (UTC)