Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Gureni Telsij

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Contents

  • 1 Gureni Telsij
    • 1.1 (3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Macaroni
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Gureni Telsij

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:04, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I look forward to regularly updating with this with more sources that misidentify Telsij as Yong
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(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote Good work. Up until now, I had always thought he was flying a B-wing due to the helmet. OOM 224 21:01, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
  2. Same tbh Fan26 (Talk) 03:50, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
  3. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 15:41, 24 September 2021 (UTC)
  4. ACvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 18:26, 13 October 2021 (UTC)
  5. ACvote MasterFredCommerce Guild(talk) 23:12, 14 October 2021 (UTC)

Object

Macaroni
  • The second bio paragraph feels a bit long for not mentioning Gureni at all, maybe could use some trimming?
    • I considered this when writing the article, but I think all of this info is relevant given that Telsij is one of the pilots taking part in all that stuff and I think it sets up the context for his shock as they're overwhelmed by an unexpected amount of TIEs. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:37, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
      • Alright, I suppose there's no harm in it. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 15:41, 24 September 2021 (UTC)
  • (Review note) American English, Ayre... :P JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 03:50, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Curse your Zs! Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:37, 23 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 23:12, 14 October 2021 (UTC)