Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Gundo

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Gundo

Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 23:30, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 04:59, December 30, 2012 (UTC)
Mattjorgdbb (talk) 04:24, January 8, 2013 (UTC)
Assuming Tope's objections are satisified. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 09:48, January 8, 2013 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:02, January 16, 2013 (UTC)

~~Could you add another sentence to the introduction to beef it up?~~
- Done.
~~In the first paragraph of the bio, you should keep the information in chronologial order. You say that war broke out and then jump back to what happened in the Cold War.~~
- Done.
"Telling the Hero about the ray shields, the lieutenant asked for both the Knight and Sajar's help in defending the main entrance so that his engineers could finish setting up the ray shields." I do nto think that you need to mention the ray shields twice in the same sentence, it's kind of redundant.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 03:40, December 13, 2012 (UTC)
- Done. Cade Calrayn 02:36, December 27, 2012 (UTC)

~~Maybe divide the Biography into two subsections? Your call.~~ Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:01, January 2, 2013 (UTC)
- Well, there's not really another good quote for him, so I'd personally say no. Cade Calrayn 22:02, January 2, 2013 (UTC)
  - Very well, though keep in mind the existence of a quote shouldn't necessarily be the deciding factor for subsectioning, but rather the overall size of the section.
~~No article for this guy? "causing Sajar to confront their commander"~~
Or this guy? "An Imperial officer recognized Sajar" Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:16, January 2, 2013 (UTC)
- Turns out they're the same, so done. Cade Calrayn 18:21, January 8, 2013 (UTC)
  - Sorry for the delay. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:02, January 16, 2013 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:02, January 16, 2013 (UTC)