Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Grunta

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Grunta

  • Nominated by: ToRsO bOy 20:40, February 11, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: This article is short like a Dug.

(4 ACs/4 Users/8 Total)

Support

  1. Only objection fixed, has my support. OLIOSTER (talk) 00:47, February 12, 2010 (UTC)
  2. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is the truth) 23:28, February 14, 2010 (UTC)
  3. Skippy Farlstendoiro 09:08, February 17, 2010 (UTC)
  4. --Clone Commander Lee Talk 19:15, March 2, 2010 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Good job. Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:28, March 6, 2010 (UTC)
  6. ACvote CC7567 (talk) 05:15, March 12, 2010 (UTC)
  7. ACvote Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 20:05, March 12, 2010 (UTC)
  8. Inqvote Cylka-talk- 01:26, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Object

  1. Just one note
    • In the intro, it says "In 0 ABY, a few months after the Battle of Yavin, Grunta encountered the rebels Luke Skywalker, Leia Organa, who were accompanied by Han Solo...", where it says Luke Skywalker, Leia Organa, since it only mentions two people, shouldn't it be separated by an "and" instead of a comma? Just looks off the way it is now. Other than that, looks good. OLIOSTER (talk) 23:55, February 11, 2010 (UTC)
      • Fixed. ToRsO bOy 00:46, February 12, 2010 (UTC)
  2. Call me Skippy. It'd be my pleasure to object your article. Friend.
    • Bio: Mention that Grunta lived in Muunilinst, and/or that Pilaan was in Muunilinst.
      • Lol at the intro. Residency in Pilaan mentioned. ToRsO bOy 22:57, February 16, 2010 (UTC)
        • Exactly my point: No information should be only in the intro. Objection pending. Skippy Farlstendoiro
          • Sorry I'm not clear on this. What info did I leave only on the intro? I already mentioned Grunta resided on Muunilinst on both intro and bio. ToRsO bOy 09:02, February 17, 2010 (UTC)
    • With Grunta's death, all of the other Muuns who were competing against Kenuun were… "All of the other Muuns"? But Grunta was not a Muun, and no other Muun was mentioned in this section. I don't get it.
      • Fixed. ToRsO bOy 22:57, February 16, 2010 (UTC)
    • Ultimate Alien Anthology mentions that a Dug is roughly 1 meter tall, so Grunta would not be "considerably shorter than most of his kind." How do you think we could reword this article to not contradict U.A.A.?
      • Reworded.ToRsO bOy 22:57, February 16, 2010 (UTC)
    • Skippy Farlstendoiro 15:31, February 16, 2010 (UTC)
  3. Toprawa:
    • Even though the Layout Guide allows for a "Skills and abilities" section, I really don't feel one is warranted in this case. The only really relevant part of the S/A is the first sentence. Everything there can and should just be incorporated into the P/T.
      • Merged ToRsO bOy 07:38, March 6, 2010 (UTC)
        • You can still definitely keep the information that was there, I just recommend moving it into the P/T, possibly with some wording tweaks. Feel free to play around with that. Toprawa and Ralltiir 07:40, March 6, 2010 (UTC)
          • 2nd attempt at merging. ToRsO bOy 08:29, March 6, 2010 (UTC)
    • Not an objection, but a reviewing note. When referring to members of the Rebel Alliance, the term "Rebel" is always capitalized. Toprawa and Ralltiir 00:46, March 6, 2010 (UTC)
      • Thanks I'll remember that ToRsO bOy 07:38, March 6, 2010 (UTC)
  4. Cylka:
    • You mentioned the Battle of Yavin in the intro, but not in the main body.
    • an Imperial assassin secretly using the alias Tobin Elad. - Do they know he's an Imperial assassin? I'm not familiar with the material and this statement doesn't make it clear to me. This may confuse others who don't know the material either.
    • Haari Ikreme Beeerd, who was a crewman for another podracer, even befriended Solo and treated the crowd to another round of drinks. - Was this at the track, or someplace else? It may be worthwhile to give a bit more context.
    • An interesting read. Cylka-talk- 02:33, March 8, 2010 (UTC)
      • Thanks for the review. ToRsO bOy 10:34, March 8, 2010 (UTC)
  5. One more:
    • I actually have a post-voting objection in the wake of the changes made following Cylka's review. You refer to this makeshift cantina here outside the racetrack. Is this the same bar the Rebels meet Grunta? If not, please at least leave a redlink for this new location: "a gathered crowd of podracing pilots and crewmen inside the racetrack's makeshift cantina cheered the news"
      • Reworded it a bit. I don't feel the place warrants an article of its own. ToRsO bOy 03:11, March 13, 2010 (UTC)
    • And while we're at it, you might as well leave a redlink for this bar too, assuming they're different locations: "Inside a local bar, the Rebels were trying to find information..." Toprawa and Ralltiir 01:42, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 03:15, March 13, 2010 (UTC)