Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Grath (dark trooper)

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Grath (dark trooper)

• Nominated by: QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 08:50, January 28, 2019 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Grath smash

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 08:39, January 29, 2019 (UTC)
2. Fan26 (Talk) 14:20, January 30, 2019 (UTC)
3. Tommy Macaroni 19:03, February 16, 2019 (UTC)
4. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:44, February 18, 2019 (UTC)
5. Turbocanon. Imperators II^(Talk) 22:06, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

Object

Tommy

• Currently the infobox lists the Stormtrooper Corps as separate from the Empire, which is incorrect. I'm also not sure if the Dark Troopers should be listed in the affiliations, as, similar with what we do with Stormtroopers, they are a type of troop, not a specific organisation. That is the Stormtrooper Corps.
• "Commanded by two of Palpatine's Dark Jedi and members of the Dark Side Elite group, Zasm Katth and Baddon Fass," I think it would be better to list their names first so the wording's a bit clearer.
• Could you get the audio file for the Dark Empire II (audio) quote? Tommy Macaroni 18:46, February 13, 2019 (UTC)
  • All addressed. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 17:27, February 16, 2019 (UTC)
    • This is super nitpicky but at the start of the audio quote the speaker says something not in the actual article quote. "Luke" or something. Could you please crop it so they match up? Tommy Macaroni 17:55, February 16, 2019 (UTC)
      • I did cut this part out and I don't hear it when listening to the uploaded audio file. For me, it starts right away with "Those are dark troopers" ... QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 18:33, February 16, 2019 (UTC)
        • I've cut the file again with different software and have reuploaded it. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 18:42, February 16, 2019 (UTC)
          • Huh, that's odd. Regardless, it's great now. Tommy Macaroni 19:03, February 16, 2019 (UTC)

Toprawa

• I think you need to either augment reference 5 with a note explaining which source establishes that he is therefore "a more deadly combatant than his compatriots in the Stormtrooper Corps" or otherwise move the ref notes around.
  • Expanded the ref note. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 07:18, February 18, 2019 (UTC)
• In the BTS, I'd like to see the full publication date for that comic issue. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:05, February 16, 2019 (UTC)
  • Added. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 07:18, February 18, 2019 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:06, February 18, 2019 (UTC)