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Gorin

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:46, 14 January 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: A birthday gift to Tope

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Support

  1. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 16:30, 26 January 2021 (UTC)
  2. Is "ceded authority" Imperial-speak for "died in a horrific Star Destroyer collision"? Zed42 (talk) 19:03, 8 February 2021 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Yeah, this guy's definitely dead. Tommy-Macaroni 10:10, 11 February 2021 (UTC)
  4. ACvote MasterFredCommerce Guild(talk) 01:05, 7 March 2021 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:05, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
  6. --Vitus InfinitusTalk 20:17, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
  7. Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 20:33, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

Object

Tommy
  • I think there's more than enough for an Equipment section.
    • Damn not sure how I missed this, added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:31, 15 January 2021 (UTC)
  • Have we stopped using Imperial Navy's officer corps in the infobox?
  • Please alphabetise the interlangs.
  • Should Orbital Command be listed in the infobox too? The individual page for that makes it sound like an organisation while here it seems like a position.
    • I believe are article on Orbital Command is probably a misinterpretation. Rebel Files just lists "Orbital Command: Admiral Gorin" on the transmission, which doesn't in anyway suggest to me that it's a group at all but rather a position or title. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:31, 15 January 2021 (UTC)
  • Is the The Rebel Files bit relevant to this character? Tommy-Macaroni 16:30, 15 January 2021 (UTC)
    • I've reworded the sentence to make it's relevance to Gorin more obvious. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:31, 15 January 2021 (UTC)
  • I'd recommend mentioning the purpose of the Shield Gate prior to The Battle of Scarif section, probably when it's first brought up with the initial infiltration.
  • I'm wondering if it'd be better to mention the Persecutor earlier too, just to set up the assets Gorin controls as Orbital Command.
    • Moved both of these up to the first section. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:34, 29 January 2021 (UTC)
  • I think describing Raddus as "desperate" may be a little too far from a NPOV, especially if it's just sourced to the movie. Tommy-Macaroni 13:33, 29 January 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat
  • Missing info from the novelization: Gorin positioned his forces above the gate to protect it from rebel attack.
  • Image size can be increased, especially the second one.
  • BTS needs to specify first appearance.
    • There's ample status article precedent of not specifically stating that a film is the first appearance. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:31, 15 January 2021 (UTC)
  • Simultaneous 1st appearance with film, novelization and audiobook. However, keep the appearance templates next to the film only, so as to follow an example in Ruescott Melshi. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 16:36, 15 January 2021 (UTC)
    • It isn't a simultaneous 1st as he's only mentioned in the novel and audio book. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:31, 15 January 2021 (UTC)
Zed
  • The Galactic Civil War is currently exclusively mentioned in the intro.
  • I think the part about the charges disabling the Persecutor can be moved to the previous paragraph, while that one can just begin with the corvette ramming. Zed42 (talk) 21:38, 7 February 2021 (UTC)
  • Battle of Scarif should also be linked somewhere in the body. Zed42 (talk) 03:13, 8 February 2021 (UTC)
Vitus
  • I think it would be beneficial to add that the document containing the information about Gorin in The Rebel Files was found in 34 ABY along with the rest of the depository. --Vitus InfinitusTalk 05:39, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
    • I really think that will feel very unnatural tagged on at the end of the article. If there was an annotation or caption that mentioned Gorin I'd include it, but I don't think that the fate of The Rebel Files overall is relevant to every person mentioned in it. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:39, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • I pipelinked "Imperial-class Star Destroyer" here, but it would be better if we could actually refer to Persecutor as such. I was unsure if that would be supported by the current reference, however: "...the Persecutor, the second Star Destroyer under Gorin's command."
  • Does the source actually include the ellipsis at the end of the Battle of Scarif section quote, or is this your indication of text omission? Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:48, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
Braha'tok enthusiast
  • Would it be worth mentioning the director of Rogue One in the BtS? Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 19:58, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
    • I don't think so, none of our many other film character articles have ever done this. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:07, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:39, 9 March 2021 (UTC)