Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Gondara

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Gondara

• Nominated by: Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 10:00, May 21, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Totally not a veneral disease.

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. 501st dogma^(talk) 11:05, May 28, 2013 (UTC)
2. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 16:14, May 30, 2013 (UTC)
3. Commander Code-8 ^{G'day, mate} 02:53, June 1, 2013 (UTC)
4. IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 00:51, June 4, 2013 (UTC)
5. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:51, June 6, 2013 (UTC)
6. 1358 ^(Talk) 19:48, June 12, 2013 (UTC)

Object

CC-8

• Context for the Alliance and a mention of the Galactic civil war should be there. Commander Code-8 ^{G'day, mate} 05:45, May 22, 2013 (UTC)
  • Added. - Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 10:09, May 28, 2013 (UTC)

501st

• Context for Bresnia? 501st dogma^(talk) 11:44, May 26, 2013 (UTC)
  • Added. - Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 10:09, May 28, 2013 (UTC)

Moffship

• In the intro, I think you should provide a little more explanation for her need to be on an Alliance safe world while her brother fought.
  • Added.
• Since you mention she was "Already a skilled thief and pickpocket by the time she was assigned to Shroud Team" in the P&T, could you mention this tidbit earlier in the Bio (before you discuss her membership in Shroud Team), rather than at the very end?
  • Moved the mention to just after she joins the team since implying she had the skills earlier would tie it to a certain period of her life (Ando or the safe world) while no info ties down exactly when she learnt the skills.
• That's all I got for now. I don't think you're Gondara-gret nominating this. :p Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 20:22, May 28, 2013 (UTC)
  • That is a terrible pun :P - Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 09:00, May 29, 2013 (UTC)
    • You loved it. Don't deny it. :p Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 16:14, May 30, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:48, June 12, 2013 (UTC)