Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Glowen Faquidde

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Contents

  • 1 Glowen Faquidde
    • 1.1 (3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 He is awake, and you will worship him
        • 1.1.2.2 This nom is ending, but the GAN page never ends
        • 1.1.2.3 Toprawa
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Glowen Faquidde

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:49, August 4, 2018 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Reminds me of the Ood from Doctor Who.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Love me some Ood. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 14:52, August 8, 2018 (UTC)
  2. The circle must be broken. Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 07:40, August 9, 2018 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 15:48, August 11, 2018 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Imperators II(Talk) 19:39, August 13, 2018 (UTC)
  5. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 22:23, August 13, 2018 (UTC)

Object

He is awake, and you will worship him
  • You've got an inconsistency with the date in the biography section.
    • Oops, fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:27, August 8, 2018 (UTC)
  • I think you should move the line about the alien sitting next to Faquidde so that it's before the info of Finn and Rose's mission, just so the connection between those two characters is clearer.
    • How's it look now? Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:27, August 8, 2018 (UTC)
  • The clothing section should acknowledge the shapes present on this guy/gal's robe, and the hood should be mentioned there too. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 11:45, August 8, 2018 (UTC)
    • done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:27, August 8, 2018 (UTC)
This nom is ending, but the GAN page never ends
  • A minor thing, but who wrote/illustrated Star Wars: The Last Jedi Look and Find? Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 19:48, August 8, 2018 (UTC)
    • I've added the artist, but the only other credit is "adapted by" and since Faquidde isn't mentioned in text it doesn't seem relevant to the article. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:03, August 8, 2018 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • I think the article needs to introduce the fact that he's humanoid in the intro and P/T. The infobox's species field can say he's a "Humanoid alien," and you can add the humanoid category in place of the unidentified species category. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:07, August 10, 2018 (UTC)
    • I'd left humanoid out since we don't know what's going on under the cloak, but added as per your suggestions. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:18, August 11, 2018 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:23, August 13, 2018 (UTC)