Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Gizor Dellso

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Gizor Dellso

  • Nominated by: Chack Jadson (Talk) 01:37, January 1, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Meesa back! And boy, video game characters are more complicated than they appear. :P

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. I fixed some tense issues with it, otherwise good. Nayayen—TALK 14:17, January 4, 2010 (UTC)
  2. I never got that far in the game but I understand who he is.--RC 1138Republic EmblemI hate bugs! 19:48, January 4, 2010 (UTC)
  3. Nice. I planned this guy. --Clone Commander Lee Talk 18:34, January 5, 2010 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 22:33, January 15, 2010 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Nice work. Jonjedigrandmaster (Jedi Beacon) 17:17, January 24, 2010 (UTC)
  6. ACvote CC7567 (talk) 20:25, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Object

  1. Xd
    • Context on the 501st in the intro.
    • Context on Mustafar in the intro and the body.
    • --Xd1358 Talk 15:06, January 1, 2010 (UTC)
      • The requirement for both of these is debatable. We can normally assume that the reader is familiar, at the very least, with the films and their canon elements. CC7567 (talk) 20:06, January 1, 2010 (UTC)
        • Well, I was wanting something like "The Elite Imperial 501st..." or just Imperial. --Xd1358 Talk 20:08, January 1, 2010 (UTC)
          • Then if it's something that minor, you're welcome to add it yourself. The nominator doesn't have to approve every single change that is made to his/her nomination. CC7567 (talk) 20:10, January 1, 2010 (UTC)
  2. From the Moffship of Grand Moff Tranner:
    • I'm pretty sure that you can't source the first sentence of the bio just to the ROTS VD.
    • Do we know that the Providence-class carrier/destroyer was Dellso's flagship? Also, you mention in one sentence that it was destroyed, but in the next, you say it was merely crippled.
    • That's all. Nice job. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 23:28, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:25, January 31, 2010 (UTC)