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Gil Jaretto
- Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:53, 23 August 2021 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:THR; WP:NOVELS
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
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Support
Zed42 (talk) 23:36, 9 September 2021 (UTC)- Fan26 (Talk) 02:28, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
- OOM 224 16:58, 17 September 2021 (UTC)
- Liverpool92
05:34, 19 September 2021 (UTC) 
UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:34, 3 October 2021 (UTC)
Object
Zed
I'd like to see the time period (High Republic Era) mentioned/linked somewhere.Could you provide brief reasoning for why the brawl broke out?Zed42 (talk) 23:39, 27 August 2021 (UTC)- Done and done, thanks Zed! JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 23:46, 27 August 2021 (UTC)
Partly a suggestion more than an outright objection, but what is your opinion on merging the last two paragraphs in the Biography? I think it'd work better with the flow of the article and bring it to around an even size with the first paragraph.Zed42 (talk) 10:21, 2 September 2021 (UTC)- Sure, done. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 20:16, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
OOM
Tut tut, the Drengir are plant-like, but alas they are not plants. Otherwise, good work.OOM 224 20:50, 16 September 2021 (UTC)- Fixed, thanks. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 16:55, 17 September 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat
The opening quote can be extended with Jahen's response. Currently, there's no context to what Jaretto's saying.Him bowing his head in respect can be included in P&T.UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:21, 2 October 2021 (UTC)
- Both done, thanks. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:52, 3 October 2021 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 07:34, 3 October 2021 (UTC)