Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Geniserian sand monkey

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Geniserian sand monkey

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 20:08, October 24, 2013 (UTC)
  2. ACvote IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 03:40, October 25, 2013 (UTC)
  3. Thefourdotelipsis (talk) 23:11, October 28, 2013 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 03:04, October 30, 2013 (UTC)
  5. ACvote CC7567 (talk) 17:19, November 6, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Toprawa
  • This article has mostly failed the LG organization for species articles. Firstly, species articles use "Biology and appearance" sections, not "Description" sections (I've made this change). Secondly, the "History" should only detail events that happen on their homeworld/home system, etc. Anything that happens off-planet, such as someone eating Geniserian monkey meat on Coruscant, belongs in a "[Species] in the galaxy" section. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:59, October 26, 2013 (UTC)
  • I would suggest removing the second bullet of the infobox "Distinctions" field. That field is specifically for physical distinctions; the meat doesn't really qualify.
  • The intro quote attribution is really rather long and ponderous. Can we make that more succinct? Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:01, October 29, 2013 (UTC)
Attack of the Clone
  • In the lead quote, please provide a bit of context for Orrin Gault, since that's the only place in the article where he's mentioned/linked. CC7567 (talk) 19:51, November 3, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 17:19, November 6, 2013 (UTC)