Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Gen Tiraan

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Gen Tiraan

• Nominated by: Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:27, 8 March 2022 (UTC)
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Support

1. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 08:43, 14 March 2022 (UTC)
2. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 14:57, 15 March 2022 (UTC)
3. Samonic (Talk) 11:26, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
4. UberSoldat93 (talk) 04:05, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
5. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 04:50, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
6. OOM 224 10:43, 7 April 2022 (UTC)

Object

CC-8

• There's a redirect in the bio
  • Page moved after the nomination, fixed :) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 23:03, 8 March 2022 (UTC)
• His full name should be used at the start of the bio Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 13:04, 8 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Done Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 23:03, 8 March 2022 (UTC)

Lucaan

• A few links are missing in the article's body and ref note, such as Reproduction/Legends and Gender/Legends.
  • Did some more linking for the umpteenth time lol Did I miss any? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:22, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
• What would you say about sub-sectioning the biography? It would look tidier and possibly make room for another quote and/or image.
  • How's that? (Inspiration for subheading are here and here) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:22, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
    • Heh, nice! :P LucaRoR ^(Talk) 14:38, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Reshuffled images, images and quotes added Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:54, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
• "He was a hardworking, smart and ambitious individual to be the youngest member of Incom's X-wing design team." I'm not sure what you mean by this sentence.
  • To be the youngest person in the design team, he had to be hardworking smart and ambitious to reach such an achievement Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:22, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
    • Resolved via Discord. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 14:38, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
• The P&T could use a paragraph break.
  • Done Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:22, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
• Is there a reason why you use the "would" form of the verbs instead of a simpler past form? I think it makes the text a bit hard to read.
  • Not really, updated Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:22, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
• The BTS says appeared, but {{1stm}} is used.
  • Sorted Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:44, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
• It's not clear why and to whom Tiraan sent that scrambled transmission.
  • That's because we don't know, we just know he scrambled and sent if from a planet Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:22, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
• Missing closing punctuation in the opening quote, is it a typo?
  • Just a typo Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:22, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
• Please, give a look at my copy-edit. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 09:15, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Thanks! Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:22, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
• I won't insist if you disagree, but I think the intro is rather short when compared to the article. Could you maybe expand it a bit?
  • I did expand it a bit sorry, forgot to respond Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:40, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
• Please include a pixel count for all the article's images. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 14:38, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
  • I'm quite partial to the autosizing from the thumbnails, updated to 150px Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:40, 29 March 2022 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• Please mention his droid under Equipment. UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:17, 3 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Done. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:20, 3 April 2022 (UTC)

OOM

• You can afford to make all three images in the body larger. OOM 224 20:38, 6 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Done, on mobile so feel free to tweak if needed :) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 05:57, 7 April 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 10:43, 7 April 2022 (UTC)