Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Gen Tiraan

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The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Contents

  • 1 Gen Tiraan
    • 1.1 (3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 CC-8
        • 1.1.2.2 Lucaan
        • 1.1.2.3 UberSoldat
        • 1.1.2.4 OOM
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Gen Tiraan

  • Nominated by: Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:27, 8 March 2022 (UTC)
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(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote Commander Code-8 Hello There! 08:43, 14 March 2022 (UTC)
  2. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 14:57, 15 March 2022 (UTC)
  3. Samonic Thrawns Chimaera (Talk) 11:26, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
  4. ACvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 04:05, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
  5. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 04:50, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
  6. ACvote OOM 224 10:43, 7 April 2022 (UTC)

Object

CC-8
  • There's a redirect in the bio
    • Page moved after the nomination, fixed :) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 23:03, 8 March 2022 (UTC)
  • His full name should be used at the start of the bio Commander Code-8 Hello There! 13:04, 8 March 2022 (UTC)
    • Done Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 23:03, 8 March 2022 (UTC)
Lucaan
  • A few links are missing in the article's body and ref note, such as Reproduction/Legends and Gender/Legends.
    • Did some more linking for the umpteenth time lol Did I miss any? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:22, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
  • What would you say about sub-sectioning the biography? It would look tidier and possibly make room for another quote and/or image.
    • How's that? (Inspiration for subheading are here and here) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:22, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
      • Heh, nice! :P LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 14:38, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
    • Reshuffled images, images and quotes added Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:54, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
  • "He was a hardworking, smart and ambitious individual to be the youngest member of Incom's X-wing design team." I'm not sure what you mean by this sentence.
    • To be the youngest person in the design team, he had to be hardworking smart and ambitious to reach such an achievement Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:22, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
      • Resolved via Discord. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 14:38, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
  • The P&T could use a paragraph break.
    • Done Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:22, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Is there a reason why you use the "would" form of the verbs instead of a simpler past form? I think it makes the text a bit hard to read.
    • Not really, updated Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:22, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
  • The BTS says appeared, but {{1stm}} is used.
    • Sorted Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:44, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
  • It's not clear why and to whom Tiraan sent that scrambled transmission.
    • That's because we don't know, we just know he scrambled and sent if from a planet Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:22, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Missing closing punctuation in the opening quote, is it a typo?
    • Just a typo Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:22, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Please, give a look at my copy-edit. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 09:15, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
    • Thanks! Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:22, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
  • I won't insist if you disagree, but I think the intro is rather short when compared to the article. Could you maybe expand it a bit?
    • I did expand it a bit sorry, forgot to respond Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:40, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Please include a pixel count for all the article's images. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 14:38, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
    • I'm quite partial to the autosizing from the thumbnails, updated to 150px Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:40, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
UberSoldat
  • Please mention his droid under Equipment. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 07:17, 3 April 2022 (UTC)
    • Done. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:20, 3 April 2022 (UTC)
OOM
  • You can afford to make all three images in the body larger. OOM 224 20:38, 6 April 2022 (UTC)
    • Done, on mobile so feel free to tweak if needed :) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 05:57, 7 April 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 10:43, 7 April 2022 (UTC)