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Gektl

  • Nominated by: jSarek 05:28, April 18, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Operation Clever Girl comes back from retirement to bring you Stafuv Rahz's species, a veritable Tiss'shar Lite! Thanks to Havac, Hydro, and Trak, who helped me with the images. jSarek 05:28, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

(4 ACs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Inqvote --Eyrezer 09:32, April 19, 2010 (UTC)
  2. By the Staff of Ra, I shall vote! --Skippy Farlstendoiro 07:35, April 20, 2010 (UTC)
  3. Nice! ~ SavageBob 15:46, April 20, 2010 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Jonjedigrandmaster Jedi symbol (We seed the stars) 01:28, April 27, 2010 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Green Tentacle (Talk) 23:33, April 29, 2010 (UTC)
  6. ACvote Grunny (talk) 23:58, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

Object

  1. Just from a quick glance, please kill that redlink in the intro. I'll give the article a full review soon. Jonjedigrandmaster Jedi symbol (We seed the stars) 22:18, April 18, 2010 (UTC)
    • D'oh! Right, "no redlinks in the introduction." Fixed. jSarek 23:40, April 18, 2010 (UTC)
  2. Please expand coverage of Bring Me the Children. It is currently only one sentence n the GitG section. Can you also add another sentence on Rahz to the intro? --Eyrezer 04:16, April 19, 2010 (UTC)
    • Both completed. jSarek 09:03, April 19, 2010 (UTC)
  3. Toprawa:
    • The intro could use a fair expansion from the four sentences currently afforded to it. A healthy-sized paragraph or two should be enough. Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:56, April 19, 2010 (UTC)
      • Expanded. jSarek 09:03, April 19, 2010 (UTC)
  4. Farlstendoiro reviews an alien species.
    • Are Gektl painted eggs really the eggs laid by female Gektls? Or eggs laid by others and painted by Gektls?
      • Alas, the article is unclear on this point.
    • If Voren Na'al spells "Gecktl", maybe the species are known both as Gektl and Gecktl?
      • Good point; added.
    • "Rahz later died on Harix after a sabotaged weapon Rahz attempts to use to execute captives kills him." Uh, I can't understand what happened, but at least I dislike the present tense in "attempts" and "kills". May you please reword this?
      • Oy, that was all kinds of bad. Fortunately, it's been addressed as part of Eyrezer's request for more info on that event.
    • Please create an article on "unidentified Gektl criminal".
      • Done.
    • Skippy Farlstendoiro 08:01, April 19, 2010 (UTC)
      • jSarek 09:03, April 19, 2010 (UTC)
  5. Prepare to be savaged...
    • Can you mention that their flesh is pale-colored under the scales when they shed it? This judging from the illustration you used. That's all! ~ SavageBob 04:04, April 20, 2010 (UTC)
      • Information added. jSarek 04:17, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 00:04, April 30, 2010 (UTC)