Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Gauntlet

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Gauntlet

  • Nominated by: UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 08:31, May 6, 2020 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Part of a new wave of Clone Wars nominations. Also, a cool little dual nom with RattsT's Silver Angel.

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  1. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 11:08, May 7, 2020 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Objections handled via Discord. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:08, May 8, 2020 (UTC)
  3. Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 20:13, May 8, 2020 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Objections handled via IRC. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 20:15, June 1, 2020 (UTC)
  5. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 13:49, June 11, 2020 (UTC)

Object

RattsT
  • Since the ship is a Kom'rk-class, you should list the class' technical aspects in the infobox and description.
    • We don't list generic ship information on individual ship articles. There is ample precedent for this. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 08:13, May 10, 2020 (UTC)
      • The GA Tyrant lists generic information such as length and armament that is exclusive to sources pertaining to Imperial-class Star Destroyers. RattsT (talk) 08:33, May 10, 2020 (UTC)
        • I added some info now, left out the width and height since the Databank only covers the old model. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 08:57, May 10, 2020 (UTC)
          • I believe the dimensions in the Kom'rk Databank page pertain to the Gauntlet, since the Vehicles Encyclopedia mentions that the smaller version (52.3m) is distinguished by its laser cannons being in the center of the nose, which is the case for the Gauntlet. The Encyclopedia also provides additional technical info not listed on the page currently, including manufacturer, speed, and hyperdrive class, as well as the number of passengers. RattsT (talk) 09:19, May 10, 2020 (UTC)
            • The specifications you listed aren't on the Tyrant's page, as this is already implied by "Product line" in the infobox. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 09:23, May 10, 2020 (UTC)
              • Added more info now. I must point out that there is currently no consensus in regards to what information should be present in an individual ship article. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 12:22, May 10, 2020 (UTC)
  • Since there are two versions of the Kom'rk-class, it would be best to state that the Gauntlet belongs to the smaller variety by listing the dimensions in the infobox and detailing the differences from the standard model in the description. RattsT (talk) 09:28, May 10, 2020 (UTC)
    • Detailed this in the BTS. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 09:51, May 10, 2020 (UTC)
      • The concept art shows the larger version, with the guns on the tips, not the other way around. The Gauntlet model in "Eminence" has its guns centered on its nose, meaning its the 52.3 m version. The ship is only ever shown in story material with this layout, so the info shouldn't be relegated to the BTS. RattsT (talk) 10:11, May 10, 2020 (UTC)
        • Upon further inspection, the model with the guns sandwiched between the two prongs (aka the longer nosed variant) is the model used for the Gauntlet in Season 5 and beyond. You may have misinterpreted the Encyclopedia. The older model has the guns spread out on the nose farther, which is the model seen in Mandalore Plot. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 12:16, May 10, 2020 (UTC)
  • You should link to the battles the ship participated in in the infobox and history sections.
  • The Silver Angel's name and class aren't stated in the episode, should be sourced to the Databank. RattsT (talk) 08:08, May 10, 2020 (UTC)
Ecks Dee
  • Please check your image caption punctuation.
  • "During the trio's pursuit of the former Jedi Ahsoka Tano, Kryze piloted the starfighter and departed[1] the planet[12] Oba Diah in pursuit of the[1] Nebula-class freighter Silver Angel,[13] a ship that Tano travelled aboard." Two instances of "pursuit" in the same sentence, can we please get some variation?
  • Reviewing note: "travelled" is British English, "traveled" is American English. Please keep this, as well as other British versions, in mind, as this isn't the first article of yours where I'm seeing this.
    • I'll try to keep this consistent as much as possible in the future. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 11:31, May 23, 2020 (UTC)
  • Are there really no interior details that can be included in the Description? I haven't seen the episodes in question, but Commanders and crew seems to describe a scene that takes place within the ship, at least. 1358 (Talk) 19:53, May 22, 2020 (UTC)
    • Looking at existing status starship articles (namely Formidable and Tyrant, whose interiors are shown), describing interior details doesn't seem to be necessary. I don't think saying the ship had a cockpit is mandatory. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 11:31, May 23, 2020 (UTC)
  • It's also been practice (and precedent) to list the old SW.com episode guides in the Sources section for Canon articles (here's the reasoning). Please check if any of the old episode guides mention the ship and add them to the article. 1358 (Talk) 19:55, May 22, 2020 (UTC)
    • The old "Mandalore Plot" guide doesn't appear to have the concept art which mentions the ship. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 11:39, May 23, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 13:49, June 11, 2020 (UTC)


  • I appreciate the shout out, looking forward to both of these ships getting promoted. RattsT (talk) 08:08, May 10, 2020 (UTC)