Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Gastrulan

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Gastrulan

• Nominated by: Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 18:18, 26 May 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Another nomination from the excellent work that is Bungo n' Rusti Get Carry-Out

(4 ACs/4 Users/8 Total)

Support

1. Graestan^(Talk) 22:26, 26 May 2009 (UTC)
2. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Jujiggum) 23:45, 26 May 2009 (UTC)
3. CC7567 ^(talk) 04:28, 27 May 2009 (UTC)
4. --Eyrezer 08:23, 27 May 2009 (UTC)
5. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 11:45, 27 May 2009 (UTC)
6. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 19:47, 28 May 2009 (UTC)
7. --Darth tom (Imperial Intelligence) 11:28, 31 May 2009 (UTC)
8. ~ SavageBob 22:25, 31 May 2009 (UTC)
9. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is the truth)} 08:54, 1 June 2009 (UTC)

Object

1. The Grandest of Masters
   • Intro: You say that they were just taller than Sullustans, without giving the reader any idea of how tall a Sullustan was.
     • Done.
   • Intro & Society and culture: Context for Bantha Breakfast Biscuits: not much is needed, just a general idea of what they were.
     • Done.
   • Society and culture: Same for the Chubby Gundark
     • Rewritten - Chubby Gundark only refered to in History section.
   • History: same for Biscuit Baron.
     • Done. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 23:17, 26 May 2009 (UTC)
   • Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Jujiggum) 21:58, 26 May 2009 (UTC)
2. Did they have two legs in addition to their arms? --Eyrezer 03:13, 27 May 2009 (UTC)
   • No way of telling, I'm afraid. All pictures end before they reach the lower half of the body :( - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 07:09, 27 May 2009 (UTC)
3. The comparative height with a Sullustan is explained both in the introduction and under Biology, but "Sullustans-who averaged a height of 1.5 meters-" is said only in the introduction. Could you change that part to Biology? I really feel no information should be only in the intro. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 07:34, 27 May 2009 (UTC)
   • Added. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 11:03, 27 May 2009 (UTC)
4. Prepare to be savaged...
   • Perhaps some mention of their hands? They seem to have no fingers, only a paddle-like hand and an opposable thumb. Other than that, good to go! ~ SavageBob 00:25, 29 May 2009 (UTC)
     • Done. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 12:21, 31 May 2009 (UTC)
5. Soresu
   • Some entry for height could probably go into the infobox. >1.5m or approximately 1.5m (whichever you think is more appropriate) would do. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is the truth)} 10:43, 31 May 2009 (UTC)
     • Done. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 12:21, 31 May 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 00:55, 3 June 2009 (UTC)