Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Galus Vez

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Galus Vez

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:21, September 30, 2015 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Potato face here finishes up at 932 words, so hopefully it won't spill over into FAN.

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 20:04, November 2, 2015 (UTC)
  2. 501st dogma(talk) 00:39, November 17, 2015 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 13:08, December 28, 2015 (UTC)
  4. Imperators II(Talk) 02:41, January 1, 2016 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:29, January 13, 2016 (UTC)
  6. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 20:37, January 19, 2016 (UTC)

Object

Clone
  • Remember to provide sources for the BtS section. --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 02:40, November 2, 2015 (UTC)
    • The BtS is actually self sourcing in this instance and so doesn't need referencing, although I've added one for you anyway. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:25, November 2, 2015 (UTC)
      • Right, but from my understanding from past articles it'd need a note anyways. I could be wrong about that, though. --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 20:04, November 2, 2015 (UTC)
501st
  • In the main body, you do not clarify the deal before going onto talking about the race. 501st dogma(talk) 02:13, November 12, 2015 (UTC)
    • Fixed, and changed to just "lose everything" since I can't actually find a direct statement that he'd turn them over. Ayrehead02 (talk) 06:17, November 12, 2015 (UTC)
Cav
  • Intro - after Imperial inspections of facility increased - some clarification needed here; do you mean after inspections on his facility increased, or inspections on facilities in general were increased? - Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 15:13, November 15, 2015 (UTC)
    • Simple case of a missing word. Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:32, November 15, 2015 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • Preliminary objection: I'd like to see the Bio subsectioned. This will allow you to use any additional quotes that may be available as well. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:16, January 6, 2016 (UTC)
  • When working with comic quotes, you should always reflect the text's italicization. We only omit bold text. Please go through and revise the article's quotes for italics. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 04:38, January 7, 2016 (UTC)
    • Make sure, also, to read your quotes carefully for your own misspellings. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 04:45, January 7, 2016 (UTC)
    • Are you finished with this objection? I see changes were made, but you didn't leave a notice here. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:31, January 8, 2016 (UTC)
      • Just wanted to double check it since you told me to be especially careful. It should be fine now. Ayrehead02 (talk) 01:51, January 8, 2016 (UTC)
        • You're still overlooking a minor typo in one of your quotes. I'd like you to find it rather than me fixing it for you so that you can learn to pay attention to the smallest details in your quotes, which is a regular trouble spot for you. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 02:00, January 8, 2016 (UTC)
          • Was it the spelling of Splendor? My copy of the comic has the english spelling with a u, but I wasn't sure if it was changed for the release of the comic in the US. If this was the issue I can move the Splendour page and correct the spelling in all related articles. Ayrehead02 (talk) 02:08, January 8, 2016 (UTC)
            • No, your change is correct. I didn't realize that the ship was spelled with the British u; good catch there. But there's still another one. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 02:09, January 8, 2016 (UTC)
              • Is it "a unpleasant" instead of "an unpleasant"? This typo is in my copy of the comic so I included it. Does it need a [sic]? Ayrehead02 (talk) 02:40, January 8, 2016 (UTC)
                • Yes, that was the typo. Interesting, because it's correct in my version. I know this magazine's issue was released last year in the UK and was just released in the US in November, so they must have fixed it. Since it's correct in the US version, just go ahead and correct it in the article. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 02:51, January 8, 2016 (UTC)
  • Just noting that I changed the P/T quote; I think this one is much more representative of his character than the other one, which made it seem like he was benevolent.
  • I think the article would do well to use different images in the body, especially since the first image doesn't really fit where it is now that you've subsectioned. For the first subsection, I would recommend the panel where the rebels first start talking with Vez (everyone is visible in that one); and for the second, I think I would recommend the panel where he's in ship and yells "What?!" while watching the Ghost overtake him. I feel like it's better to show the race from his perspective rather than just showing the ships. If you still wanted to include a picture of the Splendour, you could probably get away with putting one in the Equipment section. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 02:50, January 9, 2016 (UTC)
    • Changed the images as you suggested. I think the equipment section image looks all right, but if you feel it doesn't work then I have no issue with removing it. I've also fixed the typo. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:56, January 13, 2016 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:37, January 19, 2016 (UTC)