Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Galduran Calrissian

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Galduran Calrissian

Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 03:33, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
Nicely done. Yet another reason why the KOTOR games are so good; there's tons of little details like this squirrelled away. NAYAYEN 11:16, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
- In my opinion, they are two of the best, if not the best two, video games of all time.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 13:16, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
Kilson^{(Let's have a chat)} 21:09, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:24, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
CC7567 ^(talk) 02:48, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
Almost ready for archiving. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 20:15, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

~~You should probably add the release date for KOTOR.~~
- Added.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 02:00, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
~~Also, what do you mean by "unique" item. What was so special about it?~~ Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 01:54, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
- I just meant that there was only one of the item available in the game, and also since it was owned by a specific individual.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 02:00, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
  - Hmm, I see what you mean. But, it's still not too clear in the article. If you could say something to the effect of "there was only one of these items in the game and it was owned by a so and so". Just something to help explain it to the reader better.
    - I tried reworking it slightly, what do you think?--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 03:24, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
      - Much, much better. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 03:33, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
Otherwise, good job. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 02:06, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

~~You should use the Template:Cite web for reference 4.~~
- Done.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 18:26, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
~~In the article, you say that the belt cost 2000 credits. However, the belt's article claims it cost 3000 credits. The belt's article could very well be wrong, but to just make sure, which is correct?~~
- 3000 is correct, I just mistyped it.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 18:26, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
Otherwise, nice job EJ. Kilson^{(Let's have a chat)} 17:08, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

~~"...and he was eventually cornered." - Are there any details on who cornered him (I presume the Hutts, but the article doesn't make it clear if that is the case), or how he was cornered?~~
- There are no details on who cornered him, only that he was eventually cornered.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 15:35, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
~~"...to avoid becoming the last of the Calrissian line." - Unless KOTOR states this, I'd advise you to reword this, since we don't know if there were any other Calrissians living at the time.~~
- KOTOR states this.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 15:35, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
  - Might I suggest moving this to the bio, so it could be properly referenced? Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 20:03, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
    - Good idea, done.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 20:13, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
That's all. Good work. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 15:14, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 15:35, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 01:45, August 3, 2011 (UTC)