Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/G'vli G'Sil

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G'vli G'Sil

• Nominated by:IFYLOFD ^{(Come with me if you want to live.)} 21:07, 29 March 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:Yeah, the lead quote isn't great. I couldn't find anything good for the guy.

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Cylka^-talk- 01:34, 6 April 2009 (UTC)
2. Nice job, Floyd. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 11:14, 6 April 2009 (UTC)
3. Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 13:25, 6 April 2009 (UTC)
4. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 07:28, 7 April 2009 (UTC)
5. Grunny ^(Talk) 00:50, 8 April 2009 (UTC)

Object

1. causing the possibility for the Mandalorians to side with Corellia and fight the Galactic Alliance more dangerous. The 'more dangerous' bit doesn't make sense. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 07:56, 1 April 2009 (UTC)
   • • Addressed. Thanks for the review. IFYLOFD ^{(Come with me if you want to live.)} 22:53, 5 April 2009 (UTC)
2. From the Moffship of Grand Moff Tranner:
   • "In 40 ABY, faced with increasing tensions between the Alliance and the planet of Corellia, terrorist attacks struck G'Sil's homeworld, the Galactic Alliance capital of Coruscant." - who was faced with increasing tensions? The terrorists? G'Sil? The Alliance?
     • Reworded.
   • "G'Sil was present at a Senate meeting where Corellian Senator Charr informed the Alliance that he was withdrawing the Corellian ambassador to Coruscant." - was Charr the ambassador being withdrawn, or was that someone else?
     • Someone else.
   • Anything relevant from Revelation?
     • Not that I could find.
   • A brief mention regarding the end of the war, the GAG's fate, and/or even Solo's fall to the dark side and death would be nice. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 20:10, 2 April 2009 (UTC)
     • Addressed. Thanks for the review. IFYLOFD ^{(Come with me if you want to live.)} 23:38, 5 April 2009 (UTC)
3. Is there any info available as to why the Verpine are crying foul of Murkhana? - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 15:17, 4 April 2009 (UTC)
   • • Addressed. Thanks for the review. IFYLOFD ^{(Come with me if you want to live.)} 23:36, 5 April 2009 (UTC)
4. Cylka:
   • G'Sil believed that the Alliance had lost sight of issues closer to home - This sentence is a bit colloquial.
   • While it was not originally accepted - What wasn't accepted? The new security branch or Solo leading it? Please clarify.
   • causing the possibility for the Mandalorians to side with Corellia, and fight the Galactic Alliance more dangerous. - This reads a bit awkwardly and could use rewording.
   • Pretty good read, Floyd. Cylka^-talk- 21:53, 5 April 2009 (UTC)
5. "He greatly increased his power to the point of almost being a dictator, and became the sole Chief of State after Niathal was killed in the Second Battle of Fondor in 41 ABY." I didn't think Niathal died at Fondor, didn't Niathal simply try to relieve Caedus of command at Fondor but failed, as she later led her depleted fleet against Nek Bwua'tu at the Second Battle of Roche? Grunny ^(Talk) 13:58, 6 April 2009 (UTC)
   • Addressed. Thanks for the review. IFYLOFD ^{(Come with me if you want to live.)} 23:17, 7 April 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 00:50, 8 April 2009 (UTC)