Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Fw'Sen

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Fw'Sen

  • Nominated by: --Eyrezer 06:56, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: This one a non-sentient species of ~260 words.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 08:02, December 1, 2009 (UTC)
  2. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 01:28, December 4, 2009 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 15:09, December 5, 2009 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Jonjedigrandmaster (Jedi Beacon) 00:17, December 6, 2009 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir 00:27, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Object

  1. Skippy-suggestion: Consider adding this at the end of the intro ", named after the Fw'sen species." --Skippy Farlstendoiro 12:05, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
    • I have purposely avoided saying that as the sources don not say that explicitly. --Eyrezer 00:54, December 1, 2009 (UTC)
  2. The Grand Master
    • "Fertilized eggs were then retained within their bodies until mature" Until the eggs matured? Or the Fw'Sen? (I'm assuming the adult Fw'Sen, but the way it's written now it refers to the eggs)
      • Fixed
    • "and previously unknown to the wider galaxy" Previously to what? 4 ABY? If so, this date needs to be mentioned sooner.
    • Nice work. Jonjedigrandmaster (Jedi Beacon) 16:47, December 5, 2009 (UTC)
      • I removed the unknown bit as it Palps at least was aware of them... --Eyrezer 23:44, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:05, December 7, 2009 (UTC)