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Fuzzy Tauntaun
- Nominated by: Immi Thrax
(talk) 16:11, 24 August 2021 (UTC) - Nomination comments: Look at that lovely infobox color coordination!
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Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:30, 5 September 2021 (UTC)- JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 21:09, 10 September 2021 (UTC)
- Fan26 (Talk) 02:39, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
- OOM 224 20:52, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
Just one thing, drinks aren't classified as "food" in the real world, so I removed the pipelinks here. UberSoldat93 (talk) 11:15, 1 October 2021 (UTC)
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Ayrehead
There's definitely room for some images in the body of the article, if not of the drink itself then Hondo and Bazine or something would work well. A screenshot from Sims for the BTS would also be nice.Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:29, 26 August 2021 (UTC)- Added another image! I don't have The Sims 4, so I sourced another official SW:GE promo image instead. Immi Thrax (talk) 10:54, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
- Added another image! I don't have The Sims 4, so I sourced another official SW:GE promo image instead. Immi Thrax
It seems odd to pipelink in-universe to the words "real world" especially without context.Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:29, 26 August 2021 (UTC)- Corrected it slightly, but we've been pipelinking "real-world" on various other SW:GE articles. I'm not sure what context is missing? Immi Thrax (talk) 10:54, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
- Corrected it slightly, but we've been pipelinking "real-world" on various other SW:GE articles. I'm not sure what context is missing? Immi Thrax
I've added a screenshot from Sims, but obviously feel free to play around with placement and the caption as you see fit. The only other thing of note from Sims is that it costs a whopping sixty credits!Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:06, 5 September 2021 (UTC)- Thank you! :) And that looks fine to me. The image/placement/caption, that is, not the PRICE. I'm not sure about noting that. Immi Thrax (talk) 15:37, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
- Price done! Immi Thrax (talk) 19:41, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
- Thank you! :) And that looks fine to me. The image/placement/caption, that is, not the PRICE. I'm not sure about noting that. Immi Thrax
Fuzzy Pasta
The intro feels a touch too long for this article's size. Maybe lose the bit about Archex and keep it for the body?JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:14, 7 September 2021 (UTC)- Condensed, but let me know if it's still too lengthy. Immi Thrax (talk) 01:48, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
- That looks better for sure. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 21:09, 10 September 2021 (UTC)
- Condensed, but let me know if it's still too lengthy. Immi Thrax
OOM
Just a couple things with the infobox:- I recommend leaving out "fruity" from the |description= field since it's kinda redundant to "Fruit" in the next field
- I don't think "alcohol" needs to be mentioned in |other= OOM 224 17:29, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
- Made the suggested infobox edits! Immi Thrax (talk) 03:57, 22 September 2021 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 11:15, 1 October 2021 (UTC)