Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Furan

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Furan

Nominated by: —Tommy 9281 Thursday, June 16, 2011, 16:52 UTC
Nomination comments: Third of Tahiri's prison yard brawl victims to hit the GAN, first to fall to her fury.

Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 17:26, June 16, 2011 (UTC)
"a murderous male Mon Calamari" Kilson^{(Let's have a chat)} 03:55, June 18, 2011 (UTC)
Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 17:30, June 22, 2011 (UTC)
--Eyrezer 11:55, June 23, 2011 (UTC)
CC7567 ^(talk) 01:06, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Furan's quotes in the bio and the P&T could use a bit more context to clarify what exactly he's referring to in each. In the case of the bio quote, it may be best to combine it with the intro quote to illustrate the "Since just before the war" part; this would obviously require a new intro or bio quote, depending on where you place it (unless you can think of something else). The P&T quote could also benefit from Tahiri's preceding line.
Good work. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 14:48, June 19, 2011 (UTC)
- I rearranged a couple of things, see if it works now.—Tommy 9281 Wednesday, June 22, 2011, 11:43 UTC
  - Looks good. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 17:30, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 14:56, June 24, 2011 (UTC)