Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Flanker (second nomination)

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Flanker

  • Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:53, September 23, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: First time I nominated him for GAN he was to short, then I nominated him for CA and he became too long. If you get him under 250 words again, I'll smash you.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 19:42, September 23, 2010 (UTC)
  2. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 17:44, September 24, 2010 (UTC)
  3. --Tm_T (Talk) 12:25, September 30, 2010 (UTC)
  4. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is the truth) 03:40, October 5, 2010 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote --Eyrezer 10:00, October 7, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Jujiggum
  • Quick question: I don't think Cold Snap is a source for Christophsis being in the Outer Rim, is it? Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 13:48, September 23, 2010 (UTC)
Master Fredcerique
  • Ummm...Isn't the "Personality and traits" section just a repeat of the last sentense in the Biography? It sounds kinda redundant to me. Master Fredcerique Begun the Clone Wars has † 14:20, September 23, 2010 (UTC)
    • It's necessary per the LG. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 14:21, September 23, 2010 (UTC)
      • I noticed this, but should the last sentence of the biography remain? I kinda said it backwards in my last comment. Sorry for the confusion. Master Fredcerique Begun the Clone Wars has † 15:47, September 23, 2010 (UTC)
      • Sorry, it's the last sentence in the first paragraph of the bio. My brain's a little out of wack today. :P Master Fredcerique Begun the Clone Wars has † 15:50, September 23, 2010 (UTC)
        • This part is as well something important for the bio as well as the P&T, so it has to remain. Clone Commander Lee Talk 16:40, September 23, 2010 (UTC)
          • The part about him making a joke? It doesn't seem very important to me. I wasn't refering to the being sent to desert training. But, if you think it must be there. Master Fredcerique Begun the Clone Wars has † 16:46, September 23, 2010 (UTC)
            • It is something that happened during his bio. Many things from in the bio are neccessary for a P&T. If you look at other GAs or FAs there will be some redundant info in the bio and the P&T too. Hope you agree with me. Clone Commander Lee Talk 16:50, September 23, 2010 (UTC)
              • Well, maybe it's just because the article is so short, that the earlier sentence is still fresh in my mind when I read the PT section, and it makes it sounds redundant. Anyway, if you believe it is important (and I'm obviously the only one who doesn't), than I guess it's fine. Master Fredcerique Begun the Clone Wars has † 17:01, September 23, 2010 (UTC)
Soresu
  • You sourced c. 22 BBY to the TCW novelisation, but the article Battle of Christophsis cites the same source and gives the exact date of 22 BBY. Which is correct? SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 03:14, October 3, 2010 (UTC)
    • The source for the date is Skywalker's age, so whe can't be sure if it was exatly 22 BBY. To follow CC's example I changed the date to 22 BBY. Thank you. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:03, October 4, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 12:27, October 7, 2010 (UTC)