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First Battle of Ord Biniir

  • Nominated by: Kilson Likes PIE(The Bakery) 06:16, April 10, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Felt like doing another Galactic Civil War battle. And it isn't from Renegade Squadron for a change.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Clone Commander Lee Talk 16:24, April 10, 2011 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 02:48, April 12, 2011 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 21:40, April 15, 2011 (UTC)
  4. JangFett (Talk) 04:08, April 16, 2011 (UTC)
  5. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 17:14, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Floyd:
  • "The Making of Baron Fel refers to the 225 as a fighter wing, made of approximately six starfighter squadrons.[2] However, the 225's The Complete Star Wars Encyclopedia entry states that the 225 was a fighter group, made of about three squadrons.[4] For consistency, this article assumes that the 225 was a fighter wing, not a fighter group." What's this about the 225? Eh? Isn't this article about the 233rd?
  • IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 00:50, April 12, 2011 (UTC)
Ecks Dee
  • "The Imperial 233rd Imperial Fighter Group…" Having "Imperial" twice sounds silly. :P
    • But I like being silly. :P Fixed.
  • Just a question, could space warfare be linked somewhere?
    • No, we know very little about the battle, including whether it took place in space or in the planet's atmosphere.
  • Would articles for the Rebel group and the second TIE fighter group of the 181st be appropriate?
    • I created a small article for the Y-wing attack group, but since we already have a 181st page, it seemed redundant creating a 2/181st article
      • CAN it now! :P 1358 (Talk) 17:14, April 18, 2011 (UTC)
  • No prelude?
    • There's really no info about why the Rebels attacked Ord Biniir other than what I said, so there's just not enough info to write a Prelude.
  • I'd like to hear your reasoning on why you have "first battle of Ord Biniir, also known as the battle of Ord Biniir". What exactly does the CSWE say? Does it really capitalize "Battle?" Is the case here like this? (See Jang's first objection) It just seems redundant. 1358 (Talk) 23:10, April 15, 2011 (UTC)
    • See, the Making of Baron Fel calls the battle the "First Battle of Ord Biniir", but the CSWE entry calls it simply the "Battle of Ord Biniir", so it seems both are correct. You can see the CSWE entry Master Jon provided me on my reference page (third to last entry). Thanks for the review Xd. :) Kilson(Let's have a chat) 05:15, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 17:14, April 18, 2011 (UTC)